Reviews for Tell Me Our Story: Jacob and Renesmee |
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![]() ![]() I wasn’t a huge fan of the ‘imprint’ when I first saw it (yes, sorry, I didn’t read the books first)... And I only found this story cuz I follow you from another fandom... But I really love this interpretation and just can’t get enough! Your characterizations are just so engaging and a teenage not-quite-‘old enough’ Ness is going to be grueling for Jacob to resist. Can’t wait to see the eventual reconciliation of DreamNess and the real version as well as the whirlwind of a hormonal teen vampire! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Really like the storyline and looking forward to reading more. |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Love how you handle the growth spurts. I agree there is no set standard and I like the way you explain it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() What a fantastic story! I have never seen a story that shows such a unique and supernatural relationship between Jacob and Renesmee. The connection between the two is unique, making them two parts of a single being. |
![]() ![]() Such a fun idea loved the dream link |
![]() ![]() ![]() Absolutely love this story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Really looking forward to more of this. This is a very good version of Rosalie. It's nice to see her reluctant affections towards Jacob. Ness and Jacob's link is fascinating. Please write more soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Once again, this was just amazing. Your dream link... it left me speechless. Jacob was so cute and funny in this chapter and it was a nice break. I also loved how you got Jacob to interact with grown up Nessie even though Nessie is still his little girl. That whole thing was just great. Then add in the Rosalie interaction and I can honestly say this is the best Twilight story I've read. Bravo once again on a great chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great idea and funny chapter. Jacob waking up was hilarious. Hopefully Nessie won't get jealous of dream Nessie, lol. |
![]() ![]() ![]() super great awesome chapter. Looking forward to next. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Always loved the dream link, great use of it here. Rosalie is so freaking funny, I can only imagine her frustration. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I feel greedy asking for more chapters but honestly I like this story. It's refreshing and you have kept Jacob a very strong character. |
![]() ![]() Heehee - that was awesome. Rosalie is such a joy in this. I loved the dream too. Glad Nessie was ‘there’. As in, has recollection of it. Otherwise it might not go so well if he were to mention the insanely, irresistibly beautiful woman from his dream. I am wondering what changes Jake has experienced... |