Oh no please don't leave it there!

Okay you are just mean. You haven't really given us a cliff hanger yet and now you decide... just thanks alot.

So this chapter was definitely action packed. Still can't help but feel heart warmed at Nessie's interaction with Jake. He truly is her hero and I hope she will be okay. What she was willing to do to protect Jake... umm WOW.

I really liked the Rosalie dynamic, can't wait to find out how she knew Jacob and Nessie were in trouble.

And um, Jacob is one bad ass Wolf as well he should be. But him and Nessie working together, and in comes Leah, just classic. Well done again TIA.

Great chapter

One of the best Chapters yet. My favorite along with 2nd Christmas. Thanks for the update.

Freaking amazing chapter. Action was phenomenal and a cliffie, uh oh.

Wow! What a chapter. Please write the next one soon.

Jacob is a very strong character in your story, true to the author's writing. Very enjoyable story. Thanks for the regular updates. Looking forward to more. Can't wait to see where you take the characters in the future.

This story has as an emotional grip. It would be nice if it turns out to be an M rated fic.

You pulled at my heart strings with Nessie but I'm so proud of you for taking Jacob down this path. It gets annoying when it seems Jake is just a robot to the imprint but you've given him actual feelings and make us believe that he truly does want what's best for Nessie.

The Volturi were not just going to leave it alone and while other stories go off on tangents about Nessie going to school or this or that, you write something believable. Jake is doing his best to prepare her for what might come. He is showing her true, unconditional love even at pains of the imprint but their love is stronger than the imprint.

Another thing I liked is that you play off of Jake's strength. He is an Alpha, given a power greater than anyone might imagine and it begs to reason that that power is not just limited to when he shifts into a wolf. I like how you dropped that tidbit that he is a force to be reckoned with in both forms.

I also like the revealing of her powers. It does make sense that she could do this.

I love Nessie's point of view of knowing her Jake and she could tell something was still wrong. She loves him so much and I can't wait to see them continue to progress.

I also want to give you a shout out again, for not rushing this. I really thought I would want to jump right to their "adult" relationship but you've done such a great job of writing their relationship now. Its creating the building blocks for the foundation of their relationship to come.

Keep it coming please

Poor Nessie, she just doesn't want to hurt Jake but even when she should be mad, she can't help but cheer him on. So cute.

Great chapter, please keep them coming

Did not expect Jake to act like that but about damn time. Great chapter.

Keep writing this is excellent.

Loving this so much. Please update soon although you've already spoiled us.