Reviews for Tell Me Our Story: Jacob and Renesmee
FadeToBlack10 chapter 10 . 5/5/2019
Amazing, just absolutely amazing.
FadeToBlack10 chapter 9 . 5/5/2019
I mean I really have to say, this story is amazing. I still don't understand how you can capture and write such a convincing love story and not make it awkward as you progress. This is incredible, and then you add in Rosalie, the one person who never got along with Jacob, and... I absolutely, love this story even though I was never a big Twilight fan, sorry just disliked Bella. Never read past New Moon, but did like the movies, probably cause it focused on more than just Bella.

Anyway, this story, I mean vampires, wolfs, supernatural, romance, adventure, you are nailing it big time.
selmass2002 chapter 1 . 5/5/2019
This story is being so beautifully writen. The way you are doing it is exactly how i think would be that magic connection between this two mythologic beings. Their relationship would be something unique, only theirs, different from anything we humankind or any other magical creature had ever experienced. What a amazing job you are doing!
PenPal3 chapter 11 . 5/4/2019
What a well written story.
FadeToBlack10 chapter 8 . 5/4/2019
lol, Beauty and the Wolf it is. Poor Jake
FadeToBlack10 chapter 7 . 5/4/2019
really great chapter. Please continue
guest chapter 11 . 5/4/2019
enjoying this so far. Please update
FadeToBlack10 chapter 6 . 5/3/2019
Love the title, loved the chapter, love the story.
TIABiggestFan chapter 11 . 5/3/2019
Another spectacular, awesome, incredible chapter. Keep them a rolling.
InTheEndGameNow chapter 11 . 5/3/2019
Cute, funny, another hit yah in the feels chapter.
JerseyFanFicReader chapter 11 . 5/3/2019
Okay where to start with this amazing chapter...

First, Nessie was just so darn cute. She knew what she wanted and no one could tell her a good reason why she couldn't have it.

I felt so bad for Jacob, lol. It went from awwww to holy crap. That was so much fun to read.

I really enjoyed how you handled this conversation because I could see it going down exactly like this. Nessie is way beyond her years intellectually and she couldn't accept that Age is the determining factor in getting married. It was Jake the one who was able to explain it to her.

Best line was something like, "The only one that could tell her honestly what it would be like to be with her future husband was her future husband". Something like that, but that was epic.

These two are just so adorbs. You've actually written it in a way that I'm actually not in a hurry to have her grow up. Their interactions are just to cute. But you can definitely tell she is transitioning.

FYI: Not sure if you know but you can delete reviews. Not sure what the hell that person was reviewing previously
Debbie Hicks chapter 11 . 5/2/2019
12. Chapter 12:Changed
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TravelSick chapter 11 . 5/2/2019
Yet another great chapter. This story just keeps getting better.
InTheEndGameNow chapter 10 . 5/2/2019
Beautiful. Please update.
InTheEndGameNow chapter 9 . 5/1/2019
I loved the part where Nessie explained the abilities of her pack. It makes sense Jake would want her to know everyones strength.

I really have to say, you are building an actual real relationship between those two. This is actually how I always thought the imprint should work. The Volturi are just not going to go away and for Jake just to be the guy who plays dolls and hide and seek with Nessie wouldn't make sense. Thats why I love this story, Jake is actually acting on his responsibility to protect Nessie.
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