Reviews for Contact |
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![]() ![]() ![]() good chapter its getting interesting now |
![]() ![]() thanks for the chapter ! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Man, but this story is a breath of fresh air. Very unique, very interesting concepts being played with, the council AREN'T a bunch of impossibly petulant morons and you manage the tone well. So many otherwise intriguing stories faceplant when it comes to that last two. Especially the latter. They swing like a metronome between somber as the grave and a god damn Loony Tunes cartoon and ruin the whole thing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wooof... Let slip the hounds of War indeed. Eager to see that fight! Things have been hectic lately in life for all of us. Glad to see you are still around KE! DR101 |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sweet Jesus I am looking Forward to the next chapter! Will you expand in the hunt for Saren or stay with Jane and Tevos? |
![]() ![]() ![]() NOW THiS IS GOOD SCI FI HOLY SHIT, bro you thought of almost everything |
![]() ![]() ![]() (Tevos pushes a document to each of their omni-tools, to which the Turian says, "A broacher?") Brochure, I beleive! (Tevos, any complaints?" Tevos clenches her firsts. "Good, then onto other matters. The AI's") Fists? Other than the occasional typo, I freakin' love this fic. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter! I'm really liking how your making their relationship |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm curious if benezia will be able to be saved. Also a while back ypu said the reapers should have won (should I prepare myself for that if you go that far or will you make it more likely that shepard and them can win?) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lidochka is a diminutive form of name Lida and using it all the time is not correct |
![]() ![]() ![]() for those who are not a fan this fic is fem shepherd |
![]() ![]() ![]() This chapter was confusing for me |
![]() ![]() ![]() Dude, Love the update!Keep it coming. |
![]() ![]() ![]() You should be a bit more care full with names. You misspelled Aethyta, Saren and Benezia a few times |