Googling by future humans regarding some ancient knowledge is so human lol!

Tem MUITO DE "HALO" nessa estória...
Essa de Atirar uma faca de baixa velocidade para perfurar o Escudo eu vi originalmente em "Stargate SG-1" onde o Col. O'neal destrói o "Kara-khes" na mão levantada do Señor do Sistema Gould "Apophis" e o força a fugir...
Tem coisas que parecem vir de B-5 também...

Fun chapter. I'd kind of lost the track on this story as its been a bit since you had time to update. Still, a great read, entertaining and consistent with what I remember of your characters. Thanks loads for your hard work on this, looking forward to the next installment whenever you have it to offer.

Awesome work please continue the story it's amazing your doing great work

At this point it seems clear it is accidental. There are a lot of instances of words and phrases that are not really intelligible in english. I have been holding off, unsure if some of it was meant to be a translation error in places. But after seeing the same thing between shepard and her brother, it seems clear you just need an editor/beta who is a native english speaker to go over old chapters and highlight problem words and sentences. Sometimes words in a phrase or sentence are out of order, sometimes it is the wrong word, and sometimes it is hard to tell what went wrong.

I have been enjoying the story.

Bruh, the whole eezo sensitivity is overdone. It doesnt contribute anything to the setting aside from a warning about exposure to exotic elements in the environment for the reader. Showing it for the initial jumps out from sol is fine, but this has gotten fucking ridiculous. Come up with a different excuse to have shepard spend time with politicians.

Sigh. Really? Reapers putting hits out on people now? This makes them less menacing, not more.

God damn. *I'm* frustrated at not having a moments rest for any food, and I just had dinner. That was ridiculous.

Ah, it took me a while to fully catch that ava is an AI. I thought it was either an author error or inaccurate information on the part of the humans that someone wasnt taken by the hanar ships. Pretty neat.

Pretty fucked up for Tevos to be bargaining with Shepard the way she did while Shep is quite literally a few hours from dying.

Ladochka is a wierd name.

...Shep was being prepped to be the new Host of Harbinger? huh

So personal headcanon is that the humans from this world are just really nerdy about 20-21st century media.

Lmao "humans are scary they seems to farm a plant whose defense system is to create huge discomfort when eating it by creating burn sensation. And they eat as if it was an enjoyable to get hurt by it, it's terrifying!"
It would be funny if it's a human thing lol.

thanks for the chapter !

i just started this story, and i really like it. Never read other fic with first contact interaction as the main story. And it's also not abandoned too! I'm gonna put it in my followed list and, maybe, one of my favourite as i read more chapters