Reviews for Nexus II
SteelBound chapter 14 . 12/12/2013
To be completely honest, then this fic's quality dropped significantly after the introduction of Kaze. Seriously, he is a boring and an irrelevant character. The group's clown and comedy relief is already taken by K. This fic would be and would have been way better without him.
shugokage chapter 18 . 11/5/2013
Definitely an incredible and interesting story good job!
Raynze76 chapter 18 . 5/19/2012
i entertaining story, a lot different from the normal ones, i do hope you plan on continuing this and a couple others of yours i have read as it would be a shame to see them go unfinished
Ranmaleopard chapter 18 . 2/26/2012
this is really awesome and interesting i cant wait to see what happens next please continue!
Ranmaleopard chapter 1 . 2/23/2012
this is really awesome and interesting i cant wait to see what happens next please continue!
ussopking chapter 1 . 12/24/2011
ive re-read this sooooo many times... cant wait for you to update _
MrEmperor chapter 18 . 12/10/2011
Just reread this whole story. As much as I like Big Human on Campus, I also wouldn't mind seeing an update to this story as well. Thanks a bunch for the great read and I really am looking forward to more of this one when you can. Otherwise I'll just keep on enjoying your other works.
Ranmayamabushi chapter 18 . 9/2/2011
great story!
perplexed moth chapter 8 . 8/7/2011
This is incredible. no. this is beyond incredible. It is always so difficult to review your work. Are you familiar with TvTropes? perhaps you have heard of the trope Inexplicably Awesome? you belong on that page.

But, I digress. back on topic. reviews. difficulty.

When it comes to your work, and this story in particular, the incredible (am I overusing that word?)

length of the chapters can actually become a hindrance when it comes to reviewing them. The chapters are so incredibly detailed that I forget the beginning by the time I get to the end. Not that it's a bad thing. It simply means that I find the second, or third, or even fourth readthrough just as awesome as the first. But it does make giving useful reviews difficult. I'm not exactly sure why. Perhaps it is due to my short attention span. I'll give another review when I figure it out.
They call me Bruce chapter 18 . 7/6/2011
Looking good!
Hiryo chapter 18 . 7/6/2011
Wowza yet again a very grandious super fanfic update of yours!
zmz1999 chapter 18 . 7/5/2011
I'm surprised no one else has said it.

OH MY GOD! You kill Jerry! You BASTARD!

You know it had to be said.

Of all of Rayden's murder's, this one felt worse than that other ones because we actually got a little bit of personality and humanity from Jerry before he died. I didn't care about the swamp troll. The thing with the merfolk was morbidly humorous. The thing with the grends was hilarious. Loved the Ranma's new cloak, btw. Rayden's actions were completely it character, the presentation was very different from your usually story line. I know you did it for effect. I just don't know why.

Don't know if you did it on purpose, or not, but Gehenna seems due for a short lease on life, since she didn't get the *DING* "A new character has joined." message. Is "maybe use its power to enchant a sword or something..." foreshadowing, like Ranma's forshadowing of the BT two chapters ago? Also, she's really annoying with no redeeming qualities, so I see no reason for you to want to keep writing about her.

Otherwise, it was a nice setup chapter. Learned a few things about magic swords, demonic pact ceremonies, and golem creation. Looks like Lord Genex Karl is about to get his. Talk about throwing one problem at another. You know, an odd punishment for for Rayyko would be to force him to bond with Gehenna. No life threatening but eternally annoying.
sandcrawlr chapter 18 . 7/3/2011
As always, I love your stories. Reading your updates is the main reason I come to in the first place. Keep up the writing.
Gogolu chapter 18 . 7/3/2011
Great chapter.
ijpowers92 chapter 18 . 7/1/2011
stayed up all night to catch up. Never got far into this story. Really cool by the way. Going to sleep now...
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