Reviews for Phantasmal Soldier
Breton117 chapter 11 . 7/2/2021
Yeah about the bullets if this was a pre fate route or ubw route it would be impossible for him to deflect it but a post shirou I don’t think it would be difficult for him to deflect it.
I may be wrong but overall is a good story
Guest chapter 11 . 7/1/2021
Deflecting bullets are easy. Literally Nasu standard vampires are ALL bullet timers and these are below regular dead apostles, and no dead apostle aren't dead apostle ancestors. Dead apostles are generally fodders in the nasuverse. While the Ancestors which are below servants baring a few.

Kirei could priests could literally do bullet block on easy mode at point blank until he got hit by an Origin bullet. There's literally an army of Kirei used by the church to cull vampires and they're not even servants nor they have anything resembling noble phantasm. While a mercury magus could do so without doing anything.

Shirou having trouble with bullets makes no sense when sword spams by Gilgamesh are literally at moving at hyper sonic speeds. Unless these guys are shooting American projectiles like rail guns which can go past 10km per second. A M24 Sniper only goes about 780 meters per second. These bullets would be too slow it may as well be moving at slow motion. While Russia's hyper sniper weapon only clocks at 2000 meters per second.

Yeah good luck with that being able to fire like a machine gun without blowing up the barrel and running around with it.

If you're making unnecessary things like making it look like guns or modern weapons as threat when the universe guns haven't been a threat unless it used by actual servants or magus.

Fake clock tower things. Clock tower could literally shutdown Chaldea and they had an entire army of servants who could blow up entire continents. While atlas could blow the world many time over with their weapons. Solar system Zeus literally got one shot by black barrel.
Crimson green flame chapter 11 . 7/1/2021
This was a good chapter but I hope shiro progress with the girls also in ubw I could swear Rin is bi so his harem growing should be her harem growing I thought
Soda-fiedPsycho chapter 11 . 7/1/2021
Not only is Shirou WAY TOO MUCH of a bleeding heart here (He would have killed Rin if she endangered Taiga), Rin's explanation for magecraft failing being common if you leave your homeland and ignore your lineage is just untrue.

It's very rare, INCREDIBLY rare.

And then we have Shirou.. apparently having trouble deflecting bullets? Maybe far into the past, but bullets are actually slower than a UBW Shirou.
And considering this IS UBW Shirou, he shouldn't have had any problem with bullets. Taking Archer's experience, skills, and more, at least a minute fraction, is enough for him to just, be faster than sound already.

but ok.
Jebest4781 chapter 11 . 7/1/2021
this turned out quite good. keep up the good progress
Dasgun chapter 11 . 7/1/2021
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Peroroncino chapter 11 . 6/30/2021
What took you so long Bro ..I have been waiting months for this
Peroroncino chapter 1 . 6/30/2021
What took you so long ...I've been waiting months for this pls Update soon
bloodhound chapter 5 . 5/7/2021
Shirou not detecting Falen, who is apparently a powerful mage, doesn't really make sense.

He's a Bloodhound for Magi and stuff of magical nature.
Cross69 chapter 9 . 3/21/2021
heavy metal poisoning go brrr
Guest chapter 10 . 3/10/2021
Gracias. Great Fic.
theonlychou chapter 2 . 3/3/2021
Correct me if I'm wrong, but isn't the Mages Association incredibly against the public knowing about magecraft? They'd massacre peopleto keep it a secret.
Guest chapter 10 . 2/28/2021
Continue...
Jack1nTheBox chapter 10 . 2/18/2021
Hope Shirou makes up with Rin. Setting aside Rider(Best date waifu) Rin is tied for second in my opinion. I really like her as a character, and though her temper is explosive the cute Tsundere momentsore than make up for it.
ShadoWARmadaN chapter 10 . 2/10/2021
more please also why aren't the mages association strong arming there way into the gate? i know they have f-all influence in asia but this is way to passive for them...unless Zeltrech is pulling strings behind the scene
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