Reviews for Phantasmal Soldier |
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Guest chapter 9 . 12/25/2020 Nice chapter! |
Bluntag chapter 8 . 12/25/2020 just wondering is it a typo the chapter number goes from chapter 7 to 9? |
Trasgo Madaraz Artifex chapter 9 . 12/25/2020 Some break-lines to anounce the change of POV would be nice. |
PanzerJ chapter 9 . 12/25/2020 Just a tip: indicate when the scene changes. It gets confusing when it goes from one characters thoughts to another. Other than that, good chapter. Looking forward to the next. |
Wacko12 chapter 9 . 12/25/2020 an apostle for the harem |
Dragonmaster150 chapter 9 . 12/25/2020 Nothing too important happens, we get perspectives from a bunch of different people, making plans for the future. All in all a good transition chapter for the next story arc. However, I would suggest adding a page break of some form to separate the changes in perspective (If you weren't already planning on doing that). It would take some of the abruptness out of the scene changes and signal to the reader that we're seeing a different perspective. Merry Christmas |
Jebest4781 chapter 9 . 12/25/2020 will be interesting to see what'll appear next |
Chryseum chapter 8 . 12/20/2020 Shino Kuribayashi complains that Shirou needs to prove that he isn't a wimp even though he has trained to fight with swords and she says that he is only not a wimp if he could beat her without his weapons when she is trained to fight with her fists and he isn't. Imagine if Shirou said she is too weak to be in the army if she couldn't beat him in a sword fight even though she is a good soldier who uses a gun and can fist fight... |
Guest chapter 8 . 11/22/2020 I think the possibility of the Mage's Association kidnapping anyone from the other side of the Gate is low, seeing as how the Clocktower already has a representative with the JSDF in the form of Waver and Gray. And to add more to that, I think as far as the Mage's Association is concerned, while the other side of the Gate's magic is much more abundant, the Mage's Association's magic is more potent and more powerful than the other world. |
Guest chapter 8 . 11/21/2020 of course itami would nerd out, he's talking to a reallife shonen protag |
Mr.N0Name chapter 8 . 11/21/2020 I didn't think of it till now but with the mage association existing in this world because of the crossover I wonder if anyone from the clocktower would try to kidnap one of the people from the other side of the gate or if they wouldn't because theres too much attention on them I wonder if a sealing designate or rouge magus would try too since they tend to be more unhinge either way I think its just because of the fact that Shirou is involved but it makes me more excited to see the trip back through the gate just to see what kind of interactions the characters might have with Rin or some of Shirous other friends either that or some kind of reveal that shows how much more brutal and ruthless the moonlit world is compared to the other sides magic community. Even if none that happens I'm still looking forward to what happens next since you've done a good job so far I'm interested to see how you do plan to handle it. |
surviversp chapter 8 . 11/12/2020 Thank you for the update. Looking forward to more whenever your schedule allows. |
Jebest4781 chapter 8 . 11/12/2020 this was rather enjoyable to read here. keep up the good work |
Commander Ashton chapter 8 . 11/12/2020 New Achievement: Bunny Girl Acquired |
FabledLife chapter 8 . 11/12/2020 For all you readers here, all of the previous chapters have been updated with fixed grammar and mistakes that concern the correct facts of both series. |