Reviews for In the Eye of the Beholder
angelbird12241 chapter 10 . 10/12/2003
good ,please continue soon.
Tica chapter 10 . 10/12/2003
wow! a new chappie! Yeey! Pleaasee update soon!
LOCISVU chapter 10 . 10/12/2003
Damn!That horse was a maniac!
areddragon chapter 10 . 10/12/2003
love this story please update soon
tubamarchingrl chapter 10 . 10/12/2003
more more!
annakas chapter 10 . 10/12/2003
*Glares at Elrond* I really didn't like him in this chapter. Though the humor was exellent as always. Glorfindels comments about Elrond, Legolas and Assasin were hilarious and had me in stiches when I read them. I do hope Elrond can batch things up with Legolas.
JastaElf chapter 10 . 10/12/2003
Oh, Wednesday, this is wonderful... I don't know whether to scream and cry, or laugh my head off. Guess it depends on whether I'm looking at this from Elrond's viewpoint, Legolas's viewpoint, or Assassin's... (grin)

As always, your horse stuff was supremely right-on and spot perfect. I have taken to recommending both this story and your Perfect Time series to any writer who wants horse info, or manifestly needs it because of how THEY write horses, because between you, you and Greenleaf get it perfect. Assassin AND the mares are just sublime... and I find it adorable that Assassin made a move to actually follow Legolas when he turned and walked away like that. Two confused steps... Elrond, I hope, took note of that. We KNOW Glorfindel will have noticed... (grin)

So! Elrond is continuing to be a hard-ass, and Legolas is getting fearful, frustrated, and resentful... sounds like time for an appearance from the Wicked King of the North, namely Adar... (wry grin)

I love this story. I love your writing. I love that you gave us a chapter today cuz I seriously needed it. Now I'm going to the barn to see my OWN Assassin, young Jasper the Almighty Pain in the Posterior... (grin) I'll tell him Assassin says hi.
Asha Dreamweaver chapter 10 . 10/12/2003
Fabulous! Though i daresay Legolas is more than a little mad at Elrond. i'm sure there's an argument on the way.

UPDATE SOON!

Asha
Starlit Hope chapter 10 . 10/12/2003
*sniffle* Poor, poor Legolas, it seems he is having a hard time. And Elrond...*shudders* hes a little too uptight at the moment I believe... and Glorfy is pushing his luck...*grins* But I can't wait till the next chapter! See you at the next one
Scifiroots chapter 10 . 10/12/2003
*glomps* Dear lord I love this story. I'm so excited about this new chapter, absolutely incredible! It made me ache to see the sudden steps backward in Elrond and Legolas' relationship. *sniffles* You manage to capture the characters beautifully and keep to your plot at a good, steady pace that keeps the story flowing and incredibly involving. I'm anxious for the next part.
Gauze Mask chapter 10 . 10/12/2003
shit man.. what the hell's wrong with elrond.. like damn.. friking.. legolas should like fucking swear at him or something.. lol seriously.. elrond's just being such a fucking bastard.. lol loving it.. haha but yea... legolas just submitting to him... does elrond go too far? and push legolas like.. totally away? but yea.. anyways... please update son!
Kaori chapter 9 . 10/11/2003
You've done a great job with this fanfic! Please update soon - I want to read more! _
Anne chapter 9 . 10/8/2003
Hello Greenwood and Wednesday,

Your Glorfindel is absolutely wonderful in this and your other story. The Balrog-slayer is like one of those larger-than-life heroes that just happened to fit quite comfortably in the role of the most tactlessly-honest, steadfast friend one can ever hope to find. And I cannot enthuse enough on how developed and multi-faceted you have made Elrond and Legolas out to be. The gradual mutual comprehension and their insightful observations of each other are truly an absolute joy to read. Now you've left a tantalizing bit of suspense at chapter 9 and I don't know what is more frustrating, the waiting or the speculating.

Hope to see more soon. Thank you both for sharing.
DeleteAbandonedDelete chapter 9 . 9/29/2003
I really hope you update this soon!
Brandy chapter 9 . 9/26/2003
UPDATE?
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