Reviews for A Gift of Wings |
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![]() ![]() ![]() That brawl just reminds me of almost every Asterix comic. Loving it. XD |
![]() ![]() Reading your old author notes. Half a million at ch60, considering you have over a 100 chapters now, Id say youll manage 1mil. |
![]() ![]() Beautiful ending on this chapter. I secretly hope that Stoick will find out who Dreamer is/was before he dies. That way hell know to wait for his son in the everafter. |
![]() ![]() I'm not even angry as this cliffhanger, there's just pure hype. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Personally I always assumed he called her sister because he sort of addopted her. He had no family left, so he took her in to be less lonely. Also, dropped his shield? No-no-no, if he's going to kill himself I'll riot! You turned him from a twisted villain in a flawed, but personal favorite character, I wanna see him become happy with Heather and have a family again. |
![]() ![]() Traitor traitor, hidden hater... Gutpunch of a plottwist, good writing. |
![]() ![]() Viggo is something else in this story. Dangerous, smart, a bit of an ego, but not one so big it stand in his own way. Also his determination to bond with Heather is almost cute, I know he's the antagonist, but I just want to see Viggo happy. Great writing. PS: XCom is something else. Crazy moment all over the place. |
![]() ![]() Something tells me that handing over Dagur won't be as easy as Heather things. Her brother cares for her in his own special way, and as deranged as he is, he's not stupid, in contrary, he's almost brilliant at times. |
![]() ![]() The more you know. The snake part is interesting, but did you know that there's a jellyfish that can regenerate and be "reborn"/return to being young? |
![]() ![]() You sly writer! I remember a certain author saying that the old villains are no longer a threat now that the furies got their fire? XD |
![]() ![]() Uh, this will get interesting. I wonder how you'll do things. |
![]() ![]() I hope we get to see the Speed Stingers again. Their story feels open ended. |
![]() ![]() Strong start. Say, could you potentially give me a few pointers on how to write a first chapter of a new story/story arc please? |
![]() ![]() Nice conclusion. The act ends with them becoming firelings (I hope I didn't butcher the word). Great work and well written fight. |
![]() ![]() Alvin is illegally clever. Quite a dangerous villain, I like how you handled him. |