Reviews for A Perfect Metaphor |
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![]() ![]() ![]() There's too much to love here! I don't know where to start. The relationship between Edward and Josh was so touching. Josh was written with so much heart and care, it would've been nerve-wracking to tackle, and you didn't miss a beat. Charlie's evolution was so exciting to read, and I loved Vampire!Charlie. Should've been canon. There was something so attractive about him too! I'm so glad you wrote that storyline with Tanya. The poor man really earned the physical comfort of a nice and simple lay by that point. I also think the way you wrote Bella's character as flawed and stubborn made it all the more satisfying when she would overcome her destructive impulses to not take care of herself, etc. You didn't back down in exploring those parts of her character, and it WORKED. Also, how on earth do people raise kids without vampires to help them? You captured the messy and beautiful and exhausting reality of having children so well, and now I really think it's best I wait until I have several medically trained vampires with specialties in behavioral therapies around to help out. Such a perfectly written story. The best Dadward around. Brava brava brava. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ok I know it’s supposed to be sad and all, but I found the flashback in this chapter very sweet, I hope we get to read more of them! |
![]() ![]() ![]() What brought me here: I found one one of your stories in one of my favorite author's list of favorite stories and decided to read it since that author is so great. I'm now plowing through all of your stories. They're amazing! Also, I realize that I have probably written some spoiler reviews to those stories, I'm sorry about that, and thanks for the warning, I didn't think about it. I'm also going to turn town my moral ramblings a notch or two when I write my next review (sorry about that, too). Very intrigued after the first chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thank you so much for sharing this story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sooo A Descent Like No Other brought me here! I posted about this story on a Reddit Twilight Fanfic subreddit and was recommended more of your stories! I truly loved and enjoyed the previous story, and this one already has me hooked 3 |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is such a satisfying and well written story - good pacing, strong emotional impact. It hangs together really well - I really appreciate how the story lines have fit together. This is top notch. |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was some damn good drama. I've been searching for a while for a fic where Bella genuinely wasn't sure if she'd take Edward back and he had to show he knew what he'd done wrong and would behave better, and this fic has been really hitting the spot. Top notch. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Reat it again...and in a few months, I'll probably read it AGAIN. Love the way it all turned out. Can't wait to hear if Charlie got his boat built! |
![]() ![]() Irina and Grant? Charlie and Tanya? Kate and Garrett? |
![]() ![]() Tanya and Grant? Kate and Garrett? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Just finished your story and wanted to say thanks for writing, I really enjoyed reading it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I've come back nearly two years later to reread this story! Just as fantastic as the first time. I love rereading wonderful stories! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is such an original story. I can't believe I just came across you for sharing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I’ve had a feeling that Victoria wasn’t dead! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I’m very sad that Sue was killed. |