Reviews for The Child of the Moon Book 1: The Lightning Thief
Geurtg chapter 1 . 1/14
Me he leido las 4 partes y es increible
Shinobi Gatana chapter 4 . 1/4
I was introduced to Percy Jackson via the movie, and then went back and read EVERYTHING I could get my hands on in that universe, although I think I need to catch up on like 3 or 4 books now, because it's been years since I read them. I always find it interesting when other fandoms join together to form something semi new and different. This is telling the same story from the Lightning thief, but adding Naruto gives it just enough divergence that it makes it slightly unique... I'm kind of digging this.
Angelo47 chapter 24 . 11/6/2022
Thank you, this was very enjoyable!
Cyan11607 chapter 12 . 10/1/2022
Love the writing you do, and the for writing it even though you didn't have to.
k.deathnote.5 chapter 24 . 5/2/2022
Captain America quote right here
LegacyDroid3113 chapter 17 . 5/1/2022
Why mention a wolf pup in a cage if you're not going to talk about it after that? Like what was the significance of it? Does it appear later?
LegacyDroid3113 chapter 15 . 5/1/2022
The fight with the Chimera here has a few problems dude, like when Naruto uses the Biju chakra he punches the Chimera and sends it flying however in the fifth chapter when he punches the Minotaur using the Biju chakra the Minotaur doesn't get thrown away so maybe make some small changes like saying Naruto uses more chakra this time. Also wasn't Naruto using his pronged kunai during the start of the fight? Why would he need kunai from his pouch then? Also where is the spoil from the Chimera? Aside from these points it's going pretty well so far
Kirin Ryou chapter 12 . 4/3/2022
In my opinion, u did a great job writing this story. Other stories make Naruto OP that they nerf Percy or dont connect the stories at all
Guest chapter 4 . 1/27/2022
Why don’t people do more Clairesse Naruto ships I mean I get she can be rough around the edges but come on!
Guest chapter 17 . 12/21/2021
naruto x bianca
Guest chapter 2 . 12/21/2021
a fury us encounter
NinjaOfTheHiddenLeaf chapter 6 . 11/17/2021
NinjaOfTheHiddenLeaf chapter 2 . 11/17/2021
Nice work bro. Its clean. Its simple to understand. AND the most important thing it is original (just in case if you don't know 'original' means it makes more sense) KEEP IT UP. I AM GONNA FACOURITE AND FOLLOW YA
Guest chapter 24 . 9/27/2021
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WebSlinger12 chapter 23 . 8/3/2021
Yo, I love this man. But maybe adding a bit more detail would be better. But overall, can't wait to read the sequels.
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