Reviews for The Child of the Moon Book 1: The Lightning Thief |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Me he leido las 4 partes y es increible |
![]() ![]() ![]() I was introduced to Percy Jackson via the movie, and then went back and read EVERYTHING I could get my hands on in that universe, although I think I need to catch up on like 3 or 4 books now, because it's been years since I read them. I always find it interesting when other fandoms join together to form something semi new and different. This is telling the same story from the Lightning thief, but adding Naruto gives it just enough divergence that it makes it slightly unique... I'm kind of digging this. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thank you, this was very enjoyable! |
![]() ![]() Love the writing you do, and the for writing it even though you didn't have to. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Captain America quote right here |
![]() ![]() ![]() Why mention a wolf pup in a cage if you're not going to talk about it after that? Like what was the significance of it? Does it appear later? |
![]() ![]() ![]() The fight with the Chimera here has a few problems dude, like when Naruto uses the Biju chakra he punches the Chimera and sends it flying however in the fifth chapter when he punches the Minotaur using the Biju chakra the Minotaur doesn't get thrown away so maybe make some small changes like saying Naruto uses more chakra this time. Also wasn't Naruto using his pronged kunai during the start of the fight? Why would he need kunai from his pouch then? Also where is the spoil from the Chimera? Aside from these points it's going pretty well so far |
![]() ![]() In my opinion, u did a great job writing this story. Other stories make Naruto OP that they nerf Percy or dont connect the stories at all |
![]() ![]() Why don’t people do more Clairesse Naruto ships I mean I get she can be rough around the edges but come on! |
![]() ![]() naruto x bianca |
![]() ![]() a fury us encounter |
![]() ![]() ![]() DAMN CAN'T WAIT TO SEE SHIP CAN I EH? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice work bro. Its clean. Its simple to understand. AND the most important thing it is original (just in case if you don't know 'original' means it makes more sense) KEEP IT UP. I AM GONNA FACOURITE AND FOLLOW YA |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Yo, I love this man. But maybe adding a bit more detail would be better. But overall, can't wait to read the sequels. |