|Reviews for Through the Lines|
| kariza2013 chapter 8 . 9/29/2014
like it please write more of this story
| johnny.vick chapter 8 . 9/10/2013
omg omg more more love it more please
| MCR Killjoys chapter 8 . 4/2/2013
I love this story especially this chapter and I hope that you can update soon. Just to let you know that if you need any help with this story either with ideas or just help then feel free to PM me no matter how big or small. Summer x
| kotaband60 chapter 8 . 6/29/2012
I know it was 03 that you have updated but its is great! Please update soon!
| Kara Agnarsdottir chapter 8 . 1/31/2012
I'm interested in how the backstory works for shape and James to have a kid together... ?
| M.E.S 50 chapter 8 . 10/2/2011
An excellent story, i wish you would consider finishing it.
| Hannah42992 chapter 8 . 1/11/2009
I really like this story. You're doing a great job...please continue with it...)
| Shadow12300 chapter 8 . 9/11/2008
update like ur life depended on it please
| Crazy-Physco chapter 8 . 1/2/2008
| elementalmage2008 chapter 8 . 12/27/2007
It's a shame that such a wonderful story as this remains uncontinued for what is now about five years... I read through the story and was tragically disappointed when it stopped at the eighth chapter, and was hoping that you might reconsider and update sometime soon... i know it is very unlikely and i shouldn't get my hopes up for no reason, but i couldn't help it. I was genuinely moved to learn what happened next with your story. You have a fascinating set of characters and they each interact with each other in an interesting blend of cannon and original writing that is intriuging and i am rather hoping that even if i have to find a way to review a thousand times, you would consider writing more and updating this story, so that i can see the plot unfold.
| Kanda Yuuki chapter 5 . 11/3/2007
I think you repeated chapter 4. The story is quite nice. When Voldemort returns, will Severus and Lucius still be deatheaters?
| where-is-my-tennant chapter 3 . 4/17/2007
JA NE ~FOXANBU~
| where-is-my-tennant chapter 1 . 4/16/2007
| nikki chapter 8 . 2/24/2007
| sweetteatwo chapter 8 . 12/14/2006
please let me know when you up date this fic at I like how this partray's snape as a father and how draco was able to see harry's color.