eh mha's gentle criminal is a better gentleman

I don't like Tracey at all, and Harry putting up with her I like even less. This is bullying, just not physical, and he should know this. He certainly pegged Ron right. I enjoyed the chapters before she had her way, but now it's hard to stay invested.

Tracy is very unlikeable.

Just found this story and loved so far. I hope it has not been abandoned yet. Perhaps continuing elsewhere?

LMAO Dumbledore!

I really like this story. It's an excellent read and I look forward to reading what happens in your next chapter.

or like the Internet

I was laughing so hard it hurt at reading the Lily Moon segment ch 5.

Pure perfection. The mesh of canon, fandom, and existential horror is a chefs kiss writing. Its so damn meta its metaphysical. And it bloody fits perfectly too. That segment alone deserves an award in excellence.

Thank you for making me laugh so hard TendraelUmbra. Thank you!

I am assuming the reason you haven't updated this in a year is either your dead or having a writes block. You need to just write the saga of them going to school and the sorting get scrambled again. so i am assuming you're dead or forgot.

suck dick

This my favorite fanfic with Tracy and Daphne. I liked what you did with Harry and Hermione also. Thank you for writing

But the Potters weren’t members of the 28 anyway in canon. And that didn’t give any advantages, lol. And what other nobles? In HP, purebloods were neither a class nor an aristocracy. They didn’t even have a monarchy for this. Daphne's knowledge of the Potters' connection with the Peverells looks extremely dubious.
Also, Daphne and Tracy are made to be extremely disgusting and repulsive here.

A few notes, you did mention some canon changes such as Greengrass being no longer S28 (Potters weren't actually that in canon anyway) and Dorea being a grandma not an aunt

but you did mess up some other canon facts that you didn't mention

1. Dorea was never disowned, it was considered surprising that she wasn't, but she wasnt

2. Lolanthe peverell was ***the last*** peverell who married the 6th son of Alfred of Stinchombe, Hardwin Potter in the late 1300s, thus not only makes them the greatest claim to the peverell name, but the potters are older than you claim. (Lolanthe was the granddaughter of Ignotus who died in the late 1200s)

3. the gaunts were known to also be descendants of a peverell (cadmus), though the exact relation is unknown.

4th, to add to the second point, the peverells didn't die off "200 years ago" as the one who married into the potters was most definitevely the last of them

bon chapitre

some things should never change example lockhart being a moron