Reviews for Fifty Shades Better Man |
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![]() ![]() Awesome. Please hurry up with an update. Please. |
![]() ![]() At the start I had a problem to read you story, because f. E. you had one sentence in three paragraphs... But the story was great and you paragraphs improved. :) What I don't like is, thay you mixed Sawyer/Mia story in this storyline... It's a different story and why to mix it? Hope you wll continue one day, but I prefer C/A storyline... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hope all is well looking forward to your return |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my goodness absolutely love this story please come back and finish it . Need to know how Christian liked his surprise birthday party. I love how Ana is making everyday and everything so special and exciting for Christian so they have great memories to look back on Hope life is treating you and yours well Thank you for sharing your thoughts and imagination with us |
![]() ![]() ![]() please update soon. this is a very good story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This app doesn't give the whole story...if you google search this story and it comes up on fanfiction it will give you the story in its entirety...I don't know why the app doesn't do that.. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love |
![]() ![]() Please update |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please will you be coming back to update this story it’s so wonderful and different. I love it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() GREAT! This is just right. Thanks for sharing. Now I'm anxious to get back to the birthday party. Thanks for sharing! Stay well... |
![]() ![]() ![]() GOOD! This can be just the wake up that Mia needs. Thanks for sharing! Stay well! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nothing but the BEST! Thanks for sharing! Stay well... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ntan, that was HOT! Thanks for sharing! Stay well... |
![]() ![]() ![]() A lovely chapter and the joke on brother Elliot was fabulous. I am really into your version of C&A. It is wonderful to read such a sweet story without tons of angst. Thanks for sharing and please stay safe. This virus is nothing to play with. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I truly love your C&A already. Thanks for sharing! Please stay well... |