I don't want to insult the author but he obviously has no idea what he's doing.

he wants to make an evil dominant conqueror MC but every time the MC opens his mouth he says stuff that just comes off as wimpy and not at all evil or domineering, it's cringe.

if the author is too fainthearted to make an evil mc actually evil then he shouldn't make an evil mc in the first place.

this MCs actions says that he's "evil"
hid personality on the other hand is that of a wimp

why is he a simp for serana and miraak?

ugh pathetic

Any other stories on the ENTIRETY of the goddamn internet with a like minded plot and theme? Everything else is written by weebs and soyboys and simps. There are no other stories like this. No stories about a badass overpowered MALE dragonborn that isn't fucking pathetic. I'm tired of searching for what should be a quick Google search. Everything else is drenched in anime and faggotry

This doesn't make much sense. They keep her alive because she saw them and can tell Eddard Stark good things about them... she just saw a skeleton creepily say 'i also like the feeling of a hunt', turn into shadows and crush a child's head and set monsters onto people.

Yeah I'm sure the honourable lord Eddard Stark will let a monstrous leader into his lands just because he saved a girl ._.

The dragonborn is irredeemably evil based on his previous actions, so far some of this doesn't make much sense.

It would be neat if they replanted their alchemical ingredients, so they could make new potions in the future, and as more and more ingredients grew, more and more ambient magicka was introduced into the air that mages could use to refill their reserves. It'd be an extremely slow process, but the main character is immortal, so it'd be of help eventually.

Also, as a lich, does he not have a phylactery? It'd be a bit dangerous for it to still be left behind in Tamriel.

It was a great start but I feel the final scene setting up Alduin felt... disappointing.

whats different? no new chapter, yet its 'fresh'.

good work

Congratulations! Hava a happy married life.

well I hope author of this story is happy, because I can't take other elder scrolls fanfics serious anymore. You potrayed Dragonborn so damn good, it's really annoying that this story is underrated.
Hopefully after you add more and more chapters it will get popular.

Just finished reading it and I can certainly say that this story is underrated. Even though you butchered some TES lore.

Damn I feel lucky that I found this story one of the hidden gems.

I have to admit, you butchered the Daedric princes. Now, forgive me for this lore lesson, but the Daedra are the most powerful type of Et'ada, or Gods. The Et'ada are the original life forms in Elder Scrolls, minus Sithis and Anu and the Godhead. The Aedra sacrificed the vast majority of their power to create Mundus, where as the Daedra sacrificed none of their power. That, and the Daedric Princes and their realms are one and the same. A Daedric Prince's realm is their true form, meaning they can't be disconnected and are omnipresent in their realm. And magic doesn't come from Oblivion, it comes from Aetherius. Also, Daedric artifacts hold a small portion of its creators Soul and Blood, granting them a small degree of sentience. And, when a Artifact deams its user unworthy, can teleport away when its user is not keeping eye contact or physical contact with it. So, yeah, it makes no sense that anyone could defeat a Daedric Prince, minus those using Lorkon's heart or Akatosh's power. That, and the Aedra lost the power to physically manifest in Mundus, aside from Akatosh. That, and every Dragon and Dragonborn's soul is a small fraction of Akatosh's own soul, meaning they are all aspects of the same entity. But, aside from that, it is pretty good so far.

Entertaining story! I hope that you continue with this.