Reviews for Salvation
Les of Chance chapter 1 . 4/19/2005
wow i have a tear comin down my cheek now...literally. this story made me cry...grr
Invader Kit Membrain chapter 1 . 12/16/2004
that was deep also you are a great writer
Spike'sSavior chapter 1 . 9/11/2004
*sniff* you killed my two favorite characters. IN THE SAME STORY! *Sobs uncontrollably*. No but this was really good. I understand how both of them would feel. It was really well written and I like how you used some aspects in the stroy to coinside with the song.
Claidi chapter 1 . 6/19/2004
You portrayed Tourniquet great,the best I've ever seen it portrayed
miarae chapter 1 . 6/15/2004
Wow. I loved the thoughts Dawn had and how you made the suicide believable. I think that the part where Spike committed suicide too was a little overdone, it took the power away from just Dawn and her misery. But I still loved it :)
cherrygurl1225 chapter 1 . 6/14/2004
WOW! This story is very powerful with a lot of emotion. It is well-written and the song fits it perfectly. You really captured Dawn's thoughts well. (I like Dawn too!) You go girl!
lime-girl chapter 1 . 3/14/2004
Wow. Angsty stuff. I really like it! Well done, I think you captured Dawn's emotion really well.
*lime-girl*
Britt Britt chapter 1 . 7/2/2003
Poor Dawn, poor Spike. I like that song and it fits this story very well.