I really like the story, but why is your character such a pussy? Why is he freaking out about everything?

man i miss this story, would love to see an update soon. keep chugging along man!

Finally caught up.

Well shit

alright, it’s starting to drag on. I'm go, it’s been real.

What a dumbass. just wasted a life for no reason when he could've retreated at any time, out healed them and recouperated, then came back and beat them.

no way he has double the dex and bullet time and is still getting dogged on. wtf is this scalling?

no way this motherfucker chose to read the ponoglyphs over 3 luck and a extra life. This guy is retarded.

that's some bullshit. why even do that?

this is fucking stupid. mother fucker should've just ran.

Is Montauban actually Queen?

not even out of South blue yet and he's already dead twice. The second death was stupid because he could have escape when he got out the water instead he went right back to the ship...sigh.

okay either you're writing a lazy character or you're doing it on purpose. Jack used to spam his observe skill but now when he should be using it he doesn't. if he suspicious about a random ship check before they leave why didn't he observe the lead officer? ugh.

He ups his luck and still gets shit on with Kami-e lol

Sigh... I know it's to help him grow but stupid mistakes like not capturing down enemies when you have the chance should be common sense. He tied up that 700,000 berrie guy but doesn't do it to a lvl 31? Forced dumb stuff like this almost makes me want to stop reading stories like this. Just because I know he'll get stronger keeps me here.