He let his intrusive thoughts win with that fruit sword shit. Every interaction he had with it from the last few chapters was the spirit giving its best "WTF" impression.

Heh. For this story I guess Queen Dowager Conney would be Kuma's mom since Bonney referees her to Grandma. With all Kuma has done for the people of Sorbet it's no wonder she wants Jack to save Kuma. And Kuma has respect for Heroes guess him and Jack Sparrow will get along.

doom slayer lite

OH NO! I'm finally caught up to this story! Now I have to wait for updates like everyone else :(

well those whiners have a point mc consistently gets afraid or cowers against something he can't fight the former Roger Pirate, Kuma and even Kong. I don't mind mc being warry but come on begging? what kind of mc would beg for his life. Interesting mc are typically fools who stand against the untouchable Foes, make the impossible possible, some even inspire hope when there is none.

fcking hell mc acting like a wimp again in front someone he can't defeat at this point I think Mc should never be able to unlock the conquerors haki I know it's normal but the guy is the mc of the story he could've explain how this all started like with details

lol I knew not chasing killer while Eustass was badly injured was gonna bite him in the Ass.

if there was whole lot of nothing why doesn't he try to learn Haki?

lol Mc is funny he thinks he won't be part of the story when the guy has the Gamer system there was also the part where he was forced to accept a quest few chapters back

lol has jack not seen one piece a lot of people are unblanced heck I'm pretty sure Luffy has lower Wis or int with luck of the devil. How about telling them that you fought him somewhere close to the city or heck leave the body somewhere close then get the bounty.

I just re-read everything from chapter 1 and it was still just as enjoyable as the first time through. I love this story and can't wait for an update!

And dropped. This just ruined the entire story for me. Well it was good while it lasted. Unfortunately like most fanfics it degrades as it goes on. Wish the author the best but im out.

I must say I'm tired of the power creep speed. It's too monotonous and linear-feeling. The story's starting to lag - hurry on across the time-skip and/or find something interesting.

Your story is hilarious and entertaining. You do an amazing job of dealing with very serious topics (piracy, murder, torture, disfiguration, rape) while somehow keeping the story funny (a Toucan sword!?).

Also, smart use of self-awareness. One Piece is a bizarre anime world. The continued acknowledgement of that fact assures me that "Jack Sparrow" is not yet as insane as his counterpart.

love this story hope to read more of this story soon please update again soon!