Reviews for The Man With No Talent
James Bailey chapter 2 . 2/27/2014
well 11 years without an update? what a shame
NeddyZeeKat chapter 2 . 4/15/2005
First of all: You need paragraphs. This is WAY too hard to read without them...put spaces or something.

Second: I want to know what his talent is! I think you could work on your writing style, but I'm too lazy to give you pointers right now so I'll just go on the fact that the story sounds really fun.
WomanWithAQuill chapter 2 . 4/9/2005
Very good, so far. A ricochet talent, I like it.
ronsparkles chapter 1 . 1/15/2005
Holy crap! It's called paragraphs! It would make it a lot easier to read.
LEDlorien7 chapter 2 . 10/11/2004
aw how sweet
LEDlorien7 chapter 1 . 10/11/2004
they seem like nice people
ajaliebe chapter 2 . 6/16/2004
good start keep going
lyndsey chapter 1 . 5/1/2003
oo a story all abou moi! How tickled pink Iam cant wait to read moew
James Bob chapter 1 . 4/29/2003
Hahaha, she's like a super hero or sumthing!