Reviews for Across Runeterra - Garen's Odyssey
Guilimere1214 chapter 11 . 8/21/2020
Team Justice is broken up :( . On a side note, I'm a Garen/Irelia shipper now. They make so much sense together even from a canon standpoint and they way you write that budding relationship really gives this story spiciness. Cant wait for the next chapter especially since they're by themselves now.
ZooFan chapter 11 . 8/19/2020
Got to be absolutely honest, this is one of the best lol fanfic stories I have read! Honestly from all the connections to the lore, to the action scenes, even the character banter is all amazing! I also like how while you do have some elements of romance in your story it doesn’t completely drown everything else out in your plot. Can’t wait for your next update!
Guest chapter 11 . 8/16/2020
Damn bro, great story, kinda want to know what happened to Garen tho. I loved that!
AliceCullen3 chapter 11 . 8/18/2020
LOVE IT!
Carameleo chapter 11 . 8/15/2020
First of all, finally another chapter, I AM SO HYPED. It's been so long since I've read the first one.

I really have no idea why Sett's mom let him join this group if Irelia was going to hold Sett at knife-point and threaten his life. Not a very good decision from her in my opinion, she should've seen to it that her son would be treated well.

The amount of time Irelia was threatening with her blades on Sett was mind-numbing it got almost tiring and repetitive. I remember doing this D&D game where we, as a party, didn't trust each other, and every moment was like "I hold my weapons at his throat" so much. She should've dulled it down.

Although I have to say - dude I can ABSOLUTELY ship Sett and Nami together! That is so cute! A wise choice my friend, truly you are a friend of the Marai and a man of culture.

It's sad seeing Yasuo leave, but still I had fun reading how you write him.

The dragons denying Sett was honestly heartbreaking, but it was obvious that this is a farewell scene for most characters. DAMN I REALLY WANT TO SEE THAT SETT-NAMI ROMANCE IN THE FUTURE!

SETT DID IT! HE PULLED OUT THE PICTURE!

The final farewell scene was actually heartbreaking, I could feel it when Nami cried and waved. It's so nice you incorporated other elements from Legends of Runeterra and not just the game! This is awesome!

I really wonder if the party will get to meet other important champions of Ionia like Ivern or Lillia, maybe even Yone now that he's out.

Man this chapter was THE BEST! I'm eagerly awaiting for the next one!
Lordfinn chapter 11 . 8/14/2020
Once again, the bond of irelia and garen is beyond friendship. The suspense of will they or will they not is worse than the long wait for the next chapter to see if they will or will not be together
Rafa7062 chapter 10 . 7/11/2020
Me gusta demaciado
nikolasferreira2602 chapter 1 . 6/21/2020
Love the story, looking foward for the next chapter
egidas24 chapter 10 . 6/4/2020
Still as amazing as ever, I see. I'm kinda curious if there will be any characters from "Legends of Runeterra". Would be a pretty cool addition to the story I think, but what would I know about writing? I never was good at writing anyway
A fan chapter 10 . 5/11/2020
Hey there! Oh my god cant wait to read more or this beautiful story.

This piece of art is soooo well written that i started to think you were an author doing a side gig. Please keep us posted on the next chapters!

Cheers from EUW!
Artyomichpetrenko11 chapter 9 . 5/11/2020
Its a great story
Guest chapter 10 . 4/26/2020
Nice references to Kayle and Syndra
just to say from previous episodes Garen is a Lion not an Eagle a lion is proud and strong and they are delusional to somethings in life and Irelia is a dragon not a Phoenix cause a dragon nature is to be feared by their enemies and their movements are like dancing and if that is not enough look at these 2 skins god king Garen and divine sword irelia
btw a very good job on this chapter
I am hopefully looking for seeing karma and her backstory with syndra(which I am not sure they have)
and Shen and Kennan coming)
also a very good idea of mine Sona is originally from Ionia so she travels from demacia to Ionia to her homeland and gives messages to garen about his homeland
and btw Sona is OP af in lore
ty for the chapter and peace
And sry for bad english
Guest chapter 10 . 4/23/2020
Nice story!
Carameleo chapter 10 . 4/19/2020
This is just...wow.

This chapter had all the robustness of a hollywood movie, the integration of all the characters was completely INSANE, you really made best on my expectation for more Sett-time. God I love how you did his character, actually - I love how you did everybody's character.

I can vouch that the Kashuri arc by itself would be an excellent movie the way you wrote it, the arena fighting and the cart fighting scene was beyond amazing, the way this chapter was done, from the characters meeting to them initiating their own plans, their paths crossing, was just done so well I had to finish it all in one sitting.

The hilarity of the second half of the chapter, after Kayn and Onoki's appearance, sweetened the heavy weight of this showdown. I absolutely LOVED it! Then there was the big foursome fight with Sett, Yasuo, Onoki and Kayn, with Ahri providing her own comic relief and I just couldn't get enough. And just to close it off so nicely, exactly what I expected - Sett's mom found him and closed off at least his side of this royal rubmle.

I didn't think she will offer her son the Garen's group so willingly, let alone at all, but who am I to object? Though I loved it when Sett and his mom were together. Ahri is joining too? The more the merrier, but I hope it won't be too difficult for you writing all these characters at the same time. I also don't think Sett x Ahri is ideal, as Riot spoke of his love-interests being more on the lines of Soraka or someone who would resemble is mother.

Anyhow, I'm really excited for what you have in store for the next Chapters!

Until then, keep up with this masterpiece!
Carameleo chapter 9 . 4/18/2020
First of all, I can't tell you how amazed I am at the level of depth your story has in regards to Runeterra Lore, as well as being updated on all the stories, from the Mage Rebellion, Yasuo's arc, and even SETT!

I absolutely LOVE the familial relationship between Sett and his mom! He and his mom are actually my favorite characters in the Lore. I hope the two get to be in the spotlight as much as you can afford!

And now it begins - Sett, his mom, Yasuo, Ahri, Garen, Nami, Irelia, Akali, Kayn and Zed. This is really going to be a HUGE rumble!

Hope to see more chapters soon! I can't express how invested I am in your masterpiece!
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