Reviews for Not Dumbledore |
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![]() ![]() ![]() That was awesome - one of the best of this sort I've read, well done :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() great short story! |
![]() ![]() This is really good! I’m glad you are back to writing! |
![]() ![]() Nicely done! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wonderful! Thank you for writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Bravo, bravisimo. Me encanta este formato, ojala vuelvas a escribir pronto. |
![]() ![]() ![]() very nice |
![]() ![]() ![]() Pretty funny that this is your only completed story, thanks for sharing. It was very enjoyable to see from Ron's perspective as a legitimate friend. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Strongly satisfying. Thank you. |
![]() ![]() That's an excellent piece of writing. Cheers. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I agree Harry Potter is not nor will he ever be like Albus Dumbledore. Thanks for sharing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good. A Harry willing to kill. That’s exactly what’s needed. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, one excellent story. You did an excellent buildup with Ron's repetition of "not Albus Dumbledore" and then ended with that same phrase. And it's a perfect development and presentation of a 'what if' with Harry's character. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I come back to this every few months. Its such a profound character piece, and all the more powerful coming from Ron's PoV. Its very very good. |