|Reviews for Last of the Line
| rejooc chapter 1 . 11/26/2019
I love how you portray the emotions in this story, and keep everyone really true to character, too. Poor Neville, but also yay Neville!
If you're interested, I think you'd be a really good fit for a writing community I'm in. It's a Harry Potter roleplay site with all original characters. Lots of fun all around. If you are, it's .net. Feel free to check it out. I got into it from someone leaving a review, so I figure I'll pay it forward and try to get more people into it, too.
Either way, this was great!
| ninjadevil chapter 1 . 4/26/2019
That was beautiful! So sweet! Lovely getting to read about Neville. thanks
| NWFairyGodmother chapter 1 . 4/22/2019
This was a great story but i do want to ask you something. My question is why did you write it in that the Longbottoms were poor due to mismanagement of the financial affairs for generations? I can not see that a woman like Augusta Longbottom would ever allow anything to be mismanaged without fixing it! lol Anyway, i enjoyed the story. Perhaps you will write about Neville's training as an Auror? That would be a nice continuation of this and to be a trilogy you could write his experiences while he is working after training. Just something to think about :)
| JamesTKent chapter 1 . 4/22/2019
Oh, that hurt. Well done, but it still hurt.