Reviews for Eridium
TheRealShenron chapter 17 . 7/15
You killed wilhelm? jack doesnt stand a chance
Wolfeborn chapter 17 . 7/15
Love the chapter and story and can’t wait for more!
Guest chapter 16 . 5/19
If krieg ends up fighting one of them they are going up end up killing them unless sane Krieg holds him back also I don’t think krieg has any weaknesses not counting gameplay
Wolfeborn chapter 16 . 5/15
I love the story in the characters and I can’t wait for more
Wolfeborn chapter 15 . 5/9
I just found this story and love it so I hope more comes eventually
Quantum qwazi chapter 1 . 3/28
i’m not sure what was rewritten but but you might want to try again
bakugo is even more of half assed caricature then he is in mhz screaming at him makes sense for the charecter. snatching up his neck and suffocating him in the middle of class is retarded. beyond the charecter bakugo has no super strength making the action stupidly impossible the entire first scene almost needs to be removed
it adds nothing to the story at all. all it does is prove you need to think through you fight scenes more
Quantum qwazi chapter 1 . 3/28
ok so what a teacher just told a student off for scratching his neck wtf thats nonsense not a big deal but that’s a bad first piece of dialogue
Kitsune Obsessed Freak chapter 4 . 2/11
You mangled zer0's haiku speech
Guest chapter 14 . 1/16
Ouch. Poor Izuku.
LegendaryMob chapter 14 . 1/16
hope izuku went with avoiding route. i don't really feel like Izuku is ready for any feeling confrontation any time soon. also i kinda wanna see how they'll react being avoided by him.
Pater P0n chapter 11 . 11/8/2020
Unas anus unas anus unas anus!
Draconic Reborn chapter 5 . 11/3/2020
this thing is a mess the grammar is good and the idea is fine but your story is rushed and doesn't flow to great, not to mention its all over the place.
Karlos1234ify chapter 11 . 10/31/2020
SuperSonic64 chapter 11 . 9/20/2020
that 'I'm a young adult, it's what we do.' line is the best.
redwolf23456 chapter 10 . 8/15/2020
Great story so far
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