Reviews for Hell on Earth |
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![]() ![]() Great story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() PLEASE UPDATE! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very well written. |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow this is realy good good you have such an amazing imagination |
![]() ![]() Love it so much! Please please write more. I liked how you revealed a bit about his identity with him saying his last name in from of the Sargeant. It was so funny and exciting! |
![]() ![]() ![]() pleaassseee continue |
![]() ![]() ![]() Continueeeeee |
![]() ![]() ![]() It’s really good, please keep writing. I don’t think Alex would be the vengeful type though, and I feel like you overplayed Eagles childishness and stupidity. There’s already a pretty good fanfic with the same plot line, I have some ideas for a fanfic, I just don’t have the time. I hope you come up with something good, your a great author. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Absolutely loved the reveal on Alex and K-unit! Very original. More stories should do this. Awesome! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yo, this is probably the only good alex rider fanfiction ive seen thats not from 2009-14, since its so recent I hope that ull update it into an actual story sometime! Much potential in this story. |
![]() ![]() Plz dont leave this as a one shot |
![]() ![]() Pretty well written, keep up the good work - |
![]() ![]() ![]() PLEASE continue this! This is amazing and I need more lol |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please please update this. This is one of my favorite story lines that FanFiction takes and I would love to see more |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this story! Keep up the awesome work! UwU |