Reviews for A Heart of Amber
Mew Universe chapter 5 . 4/22/2010
LOL this is a rather humorous story! Although, kinda a freaky coincidence - my name is Amber and I have brown in my hair like she does. Oh, and I can get angry like her (although not nearly as much!). I liked reading about Duke, since the show focuses so much on Yugi and the others :)
Black Rose chapter 1 . 1/1/2004
When I first saw the words “friend from America” I though she would be a Mary Sue but boy, was I wrong. Ambers a great OC with flaws that make her believable. She isn’t automatically adored by everyone either. You did a great job with all the characters personalities and didn’t bash anyone, which is a rare, but excellent, find.
I’m glad that I found a good Duke (Or Otogi) fic. He’s never been a hated character, but has never gotten the fan base of, say, Seto Kaiba. You do a great job with grammar, character personalities, and basically everything. Keep up the good work!
Princess Ria chapter 2 . 9/13/2003
PR: Poor Duke.

Seto: *snickers*

Yami: *raises an eyebrow* There's a killer in the elevator?

Princess Ria chapter 1 . 9/13/2003


Yami: Joey is my new hero. -

PR: Even though I hate Joey, OMG, that was priceless! "Need some doggie bags for that?" XD That was GOOD!

Seto: -_-

PR: I mean...throwing pizza at you was totally not cool

Seto: -_-
Corran And Valin chapter 5 . 8/20/2003
Aw! *bounces* Amber and Duke are so cool together! !
Corran And Valin chapter 1 . 8/20/2003
AHAHAH! Joey, you fool. XD It's Amber Whe! XD
Alan Wilkinson chapter 5 . 8/17/2003
Not Bad...
DM-san chapter 5 . 5/5/2003
This story is cute. But I have some constructive critism. It's Arigato...not with an 'a'.
SK Dark Dragon chapter 5 . 5/3/2003
Yes, Amber might be reappearing sometime in the next fic.

"She might go nicely when they get to..."

Don't give anything away! Chapter one of my next fic will be up soon!

"Thank you for reading and reviewing, all of you!"

Yes, thanks! These reviews make my day! :)
Silver Dragon Golden Dragon chapter 5 . 5/3/2003
Golden: Yay!

Silver: Hmm, good finish, sehr gut. (Very good in German...)

Golden: Does this signal a reappearance of Amber? _

Silver: Great Ra, I just realized she follows a similar naming system to ours... *is off in her own little world*

Golden: Um... okay...
Silver Dragon Golden Dragon chapter 4 . 5/3/2003
Golden: Aiee! No no no!

Silver:*laughs* What a wonderfully terrible sitiation.. don't mind me, I'm in an eviller mood than usual today.

Golden:*?* Is "eviller" even a word?
Yami's Kuribo chapter 5 . 5/2/2003
Great end to the fic Seto-Kaiba and Red Archery Girl! I loved it!

I can't wait until your next fic gets up!
Aurora Sahara chapter 1 . 5/2/2003



Tara:oh Kami-sama help me!

C293:Ohh Tara-san!_

Tara:NO!*steams off*

C293:Oh come on! Just one pleasee!

Tara:NEVER! You going hyper is my greatest fear!

C293:*pouts & gives Tara "The look"*

Tara:O.O; fine fine here!*gives her the big bag of suger*

C293:*gulps it down then jumps around*WE!


C293:*jumps on Tara's back*GIDDIE UP TAI!


C293:Well tough giddie up!

Tara:-.-; *giddys up*

C293:YAY YAY!oh btw great fic!. plz continue!
Yami's Kuribo chapter 1 . 5/1/2003
Great job Seto-Kaiba! I love it! Please write the next chapies soon! As you know I'm a Duke-fan!

Silver Dragon Golden Dragon chapter 3 . 5/1/2003
Silver:*rubs hands together gleefully* Poor Duke, heh heh...

Golden:*sweatdrop* I feel sorry for Amber, too, now. Oh- Thanks for reviewing Deepest Need!
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