Reviews for Dangerous |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I really like this story! Both of them are in character and its really well written. Nice job! :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() It is a well thought out short, it kinda made me sad that it ended so soon... Dimentio, is written as accurately as can be, I would say he's in character. Mimi's interaction with him was what really told the tale, so to speak. I'd love to see a longer story for this, however it was fun to read this even as a short. Thank you for writing something so fun to read! |