Ok, this is where I drop off for a while. I'll probably come back somewhere around next year. Like I said in one of the previous chapters reviews, I like cooking these chapters, let them simmer, and open the lid, letting all of it flood me. In case doesn't notify you on review notifications, I left a review on almost every chapter, just letting you know.. One or two I seem to have forgotten, cuz, well, I forgot. I am really quite sad that I came to the last updated chapter, but, oh well. All good things must come to an end. No need to rush, perfection isn't achieved overnight, but, do finish at least 10 chapters by next year? I am actually quite busy preparing for jee advanced as well as bitsat, making it a wonder as to how I even finished 420 k words, but oh well, Ig it was worth it. I can see that a lot of thought, love and care went into it. And I absolutely respect it. Atp, this is a bye, and not a review. Mbad. Like always, well made and onwardsss.

I was actually gonna comment on the psychiatrists Sherlock behaviour. Although, when you said 2 spiders, were they the heroes, or the literal arachnids? I didn't get it. Anyway, I am fine with a filler chapter. Although it's positioning is a little concerning. Right when I am crying about reaching the end of the story (the amount already written) you go ahead and whack this against my head. . Anyway, like always, keep up the good work. And onwardsss

Man, after all that, all that comes to mind is a line from another percy fanfic. Truly unfortunate that I do not remember it's name, but the line went "it's not a question of *if* he breaks, but *when* he breaks." By some chapter 120 or so, I will be surprised beyond belief if he doesn't snap. This was a pretty decent chapter, the authors note felt unnecessary. Well, peace out, and onwardsss

Good chapter, nothing much fo comment. Nothing which particularly stuck out, anyway. I am approaching the end of this. Pretty depressing, that this is gonna end. I usually read fanfics like this. Let it stockpile, then blow through all the chapters. Same for manhuas as well. Anyway, this met expectations, and onwardss

Honestly, this was gold. Especially, especiallllyyy the last part. It had me at the edge of my seat. This was slower, cleaner, and very to the point. Basically, easy to understand without too much brain. I really don't know what those lava creatures are tho. I guess they are from one of the newer marvel movies. Kinda confused me, but eh, I'll just think of em as an oc. Well done, and keep up the good work.

I dunno what happened here. This was a messy chapter for sure. It lacks your usual clarity. I hope this doesn't continue, cuz I really love immersing myself in it. I kinda understand that with so many scene changes, it's difficult to keep the flow, but, still, Coulda spent 2 or 3 hundred words on the descriptions. Thats it. This was a substandard chapter.

Hmm, that was an interesting turn, albeit small and irrelevant to the plot line. I can appreciate these little things. I am not sure tho, if the dude is trying to play it off, or if he really is an iron man fan. Anyway, stuff feels kinda dull without perce. Bring 'im back plij.

I'll be blunt. I absolutely do not like what happened with the ancient one. I really like her. She is like a calm, unshakeable and omniscient beacon. I do understand your thought process, somewhat. To brand her a demigod, to explicitly ingrained that the mcu is weaker than the pjo, is something quintessential to the plotline. But to do her dirty like that, well it doesn't sit write with me. But then again, it's your story, not mine, so go wild. Just know that one of your readers doesn't like it, that's all.

Hmm, it's a fine chapter. Although, without percy a certain glow is missing. But it is something i can live with. I shoulda told this sooner, but spelling mistakes do exist. Kinda expected from a fanfic, but still, kinda breaks the flow. I shoulda said this earlier, but never felt that sense of emptiness or lack of things to review. Finally, now that a normal chapter arrived, I can finally get it off my chest.

Ok, this chapter blew it out of the park. This is unreal. How did you expound on the series so much? Where did you get all of this? This character development is... absolutely astounding. I will be honest, I haven't read much, genre wise, but word wise, I have definetely read at least thrice that of the average 16 year old. But this, well, this has got me gobsmacked. I will never understand where you pulled such stunning visuals and characteristics. I wanted to review about the ancient ones inclusion and how happy i was about it, but I suddenly don't care. Absolutely fabulous man. Forget any praise I wrote about you before. It doesn't matter. I would like to reintroduce myself as your fan. As a kid prepping for advanced and bitsat, I really don't know how I get the time to read it, but now, I can confidently say, it was worth the time it consumed.

Hmmm, an arc over coping. Not rlly an arc, just a kinda filler. I kinda dig the idea of including one. Atp, I end up loving whatever you do. Gotta say, this is a first for me. I usually have something to critique, but you got me stumped. It's good, and I'm off to the next. Ha ha, I am having fun

Man, you are good. Just about every logic and flaw I brought up in the previous chapters were addressed, usually in the very next one. Pretty satisfying, if anything. I got nthng much to say, except for thr usual "looking forward to where you take this" and "onwardss"

Hmm, I kinda expected the time travel arc to dragon for longer. Man, so far my prediction accuracy is a whopping 0%. This is the first time this has happened to me. I managed to deduce that you had a framework ready, but that was deduction, not a prediction. Dem, this isreally good, and I hope it never stops.

Wow, this keeps going in directions I do not expect. Although, I do fail to understand, how exactly did percy end up in front of avengers tower? From chronos to avengers? Why?

I knew it. Ha ha. I called it at the beginning of the time travel arc. I was right, you already had a framework planned. I am so happy I was right. Still, the time travel arc was definetely weird, but... butttt... it was definetely a change of pace. It was something new and refreshing, even if it was disorienting. So far, you have taken this story through so many different things I had never expected, so now. Well, I can't wait to see where it goes.