Reviews for Of Water and Salt |
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![]() ![]() ![]() typical arrogant short sighted thor |
![]() ![]() ![]() Percy gonna get any agency any time soon? He mentions how much he doesn’t wanna do stuff for Olympus but just does it anyway. Doesn’t make sense at all. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cheers, man. take your time and get back to us when you can. Another great chapter will always be worth the wait. Keep up the good work, and have a great day! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Excellent chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sheesh! Nice update |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really like this story but I honestly feel that it contradicts itself at times. in the earlier chapters during the chitauri invasion it was said that it took the combined powers of the big 3 to stop Percy from mist traveling. yet some of the more recent chapters make it seem like each of them can easily overpower him. Also, Athena's argument in this chapter doesn't make sense given what all we know Percy already did in the war with gaia. it honestly seemed very forced and inherently contradictory |
![]() ![]() ![]() And in this game you win or you die But on a serious note happy to see Blackjack its nice reading a story where the author remembers or uses Blackjack and Mrs. O'leary |
![]() ![]() ![]() Will Athena’s hate for Percy never end? Could Annabeth be resurrected or it’s a moot point? |
![]() ![]() ![]() That’s tough man but I liked the chapter a lot |
![]() ![]() ![]() Amazing update |
![]() ![]() ![]() fantastic story! very well-written percy jackson AU |
![]() ![]() ![]() God I’m really hoping for some sort of pay off in the story, him remaining an eternal servant to the gods wouldn’t be very satisfying. I think most people would like to see Percy eclipsing the gods and maybe giving Zeus a kick in the teeth. Probably not even needed to eclipse the gods but just get out from under their yoke. Think you’ve done a great job with Athena and making her as unlikeable as possible. Kinda surprised with how venomous Demeter was, is there a reason she was so enraged by the device? Poseidon and Zeus make sense as their domains are elemental based mostly and mortals screwing with that would enrage them, just curious as to why Demeter had such an intense reaction in the situation. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awaiting more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Also I liked what you did with the gods this chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter, I’m also one of what seems to be a few agents of shields fan so enjoyed the tie in with the show. Would like to see him work more with the crew and maybe even meet quake. Also have you ever mentioned a potential paring for this story? |