What was Artemis problem and why was Reyna crying she made the decision of her own will and it was accepted?
What happened to beth,thalia,Leo grover the twins and nico

update?

This is so good!

You are an AMAZING writer

It feels like the whole time travel arc was written just so captain marvel would be friendly to Percy when she shows up again and everything else was just filler to try and make it seem deeper than that. The ending to the arc was extremely awkward as it felt like the story was being beat with a hammer to get things to line up with the timeline. His priorities at the end only made sense if he knew he was in the same timeline and had to keep things the same.

Story has been great so far aside from that.

Dumbest chapter so far. Absolutely no reason for him to do all that stuff before going to Rome when Hera promised him a full heal afterward.

As a major ASOAIF fan, this is the only story I look for updates more than winds of winter.

Yeah this story drops into the freaking abyss of trash at the start of the time travel arc. No one else is the entire story has consequences for their actions except Percy. He also is the only one who faces the consequences of others action. Why waste so many words showing other peoples pov if he is going to be the only one getting in trouble or hurt.? The story had so much potential but now that im caught up i realize it was a complete waste of my time. Should have trusted the other reviews.

Yeah its not fun to read the story of a man with zero agency and nothing to show for it after 30 chapters. Just dragging it on and on with no changes and the same old sht again and again. Gained absolutely nothing from the time travel arc accepta debt to chronos, Hera didnt save anyone(not gonna read that dogsht prequel and waste more of my time). Your Percy Jackson is just a dog that gives his leash to anyone and everyone and then constantly complains and changes nothing by making the same mistakes over and over again. Really curious as to what hes gonna do to jane and Sif for bringing complete strangers around his mom and sister. (Probably nothing cause hes fking pathetic)

Okay so essentially what youve done is just made the entire time travel arc completely irrelevant and a complete waste of time. There is absolutely no reason why the pace and length of that arc needed to be so long for nothing to change other than to make it so that now Percy wont go on a rampage and kill Morgana and Tony. What a waste of time.

Yeah this is seriously dropping in quality. Its gone from a Percy Jackson story to just a mess of confusing povs and plots thats make zero sense. Of course authors always say "its all planned" but this plan of yours is dropping the quality of what the story was.

Bloody hell mate

Hi, please ignore any negitive reviews, your story is amazing. Anyone that has said anything negitive hasnt written a book before. You made percy your own character, he has experienced pain and hell and the way you wrote him comming out if it is exactly what should have been done in the authers books. Please keep on writing, you have a nack for it and you are brillinat.

Hehehwheheh chills

Hey Author I got a question, around 2020 I found this fic with different versions like the the flask scene with black widow at avengers tower but that was as far as it went but the story had the same skeleton just a different skin. I was wondering if you changed the story or changed name and scraped the last one cause I can't find that fic no matter where I look. Btw keep up the good work been here since day one and I've loved every part even the time travel arc : )