Reviews for Of Water and Salt |
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![]() ![]() Was this put on hiatus or abandoned? |
![]() ![]() Ruined a good story with bullshit |
![]() ![]() Trash |
![]() ![]() ![]() I have come across this story in the past but decided not to read it because I was put off by it being a Marvel crossover. I figured I wouldn't like it, not because I don't like Marvel (because I do), but recently, I decided to give this story a chance, and man, was I whole-heartedly wrong about it. I wasn't expecting it to be so masterfully written, with a brilliant story. This truly is a great piece of work, and I'm glad I'm finally reading it. |
![]() ![]() How long until Gorr appears and kills the Olympians. I'm fed up |
![]() ![]() ![]() bringing x-men in the ff |
![]() ![]() I like that you made it so that Peter and Gwen’s spider sense goes on overdrive when around Percy. In this story, Percy slew Arachne, correct? In Greek myth Arachne is referred to as the mother of all spiders, (or can be referred to as such given that Athena cursed Arachne and all of her children to ‘weave webs forever’.) the idea that all spiders would be instinctively terrified and warned off from going near Percy, makes complete sense in a world of myth and magic. And since Peter and Gwen inherited their powers from spiders that bit them, it makes sense that their spider senses would go off. Now, would they technically be part of the mythological world or not? This could be an interesting technicality to exploit if they can somewhat see or sense through the mist, after all they seemed to be able to see a tree nymph, and managed to web her up before she turned into a tree again. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Enjoyed re-reading this. Here's hoping for an update |
![]() ![]() ![]() I feel happy knowing he is with his family again. |
![]() ![]() ![]() The power scaling is a bit weird here. I get that Percy is op but how is a demigod more powerful than Thor an actual god? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this story,thank you for creating such a beatiful master piece |
![]() ![]() ![]() Excellent chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() I would like to add a more positive review as my last one was wholly negative when I really like the story and characterization outside of a few moments. You have done a wonderful job and I hope you keep up the good work. |
![]() ![]() ![]() im sad that i now have to wait to read the next chapter. I love this story so far, especially with the direction you’ve taken percy. |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's incredibly frustrating that the direction you have went with Percy involves him folding any time someones makes a demand of him, like seriously is there a single time where he stands his ground and tells someone to screw off? He just agrees immediately and then you'll write that he had no choice without explaining at all. Like why did he have to go to Kamar Taj? Bc someone that he was actively angry with told him he needed to right after you just reminded us all that Percy has been given total authority over the situation to be judge and jury. He literally refuses to tell people no even if it doesn't fit the character bc you've already mapped out where he is supposed to go. |