Reviews for PreOni
Son-Of-The-Hunter chapter 1 . 1/6/2005
I've got two phrases to say about this : Nice. and Update soon. Oni is one of my favorite games and I might write a story about it later on.
Ryan chapter 1 . 10/7/2003
UPDATE!
Cyblade Silver chapter 1 . 9/8/2003
This is interesting. I hope you write more soon. :)
Bobster chapter 1 . 5/1/2003
I like this fic so far. The only problem I found with it was the grammer in the sentence:

"Everytime, after waking up (if he get to sleep), he will notice more and more grey hair covering his otherwise brown ones,..."

You could maybe change it to something like:

"Each time he would look in the mirror upon waking (whenever he found time to sleep), he would notice more and more grey hairs covering his otherwise brown ones,..."

Looking forward to Chapter 2 of this prequel.