Reviews for Wolves That Walk Alone |
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![]() ![]() Is this based off the netflix show the mandolorion |
![]() ![]() Words cannot describe how happy I am to see you update this story again. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Gotta be the best crossover I've ever read! Will six need the other maidens arms to open the other vaults or will Yangs work for them all? |
![]() ![]() Hey still enjoying it myself. I do like Six fighting with the different sides of himself. The tool and the person. It's compelling to me. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Second review, please keep writing this. The drama is funny when they can't do anything. And also, you are the author not them. If they've got a problem with the story, then they can write one that they think is better. Also ignore the forerunner lore for the most part. I do. They're meant to be mysterious and long since dead. Getting third hand accounts rather than a 1st person view of them is more thematic to halo honestly. And you're pacing for the story is good. Action chapters shouldn't be all there is to a story. I didn't like all the gore tho. It got a little gratuitous reading how someone tortured and mutilated people. It just didn't feel good to read because I am sane. I'm fairly certain that this isn't a ground breaking opinion, but still. |
![]() ![]() ![]() So, random thoughts here. I am hoping that the Wolf Six encountered is a Dire Wolf (AND before anyone is asking is yes, it's because of the "resurrection" of Dire wolves) |
![]() ![]() ![]() The shade people are giving you for writing a character a different way is asinine. I don't see the problem. It's not like rwby is all that great a show anyhow. The shows world building is lazy, it's moral grandstanding is exhausting, and the main characters aren't very good at being heroic. They often cause more problems than they solve. Not to mention the hypocrisy. It makes me mad. The story is good tho. Been binge reading it for the past 3 days. Very good, want more, and I realize that you don't like shipping. But guild girl and six are in a Christian-like relationship? Right? I'm not asking they boned, that would be crass. But you very obviously made goblin slayer and guild girl into the perfect nuclear family, just with a mom who's the best, and a dad who's going to absolutely terrify any guy who dates his daughter. The idea of myne(can't remember how to spell her name RN SRY) bringing her boyfriend to meat her parents is very funny. Please keep writing, don't let the haters get you down. The story is good. Very good. Up there with Remnant infernis, souls and singularities, dust and echoes, Grimm Nightmares, and redemption of a betrayer. All good stories and anyone with sense and a properly functioning cool detector will realize that I speak truth. |
![]() ![]() ![]() You know you’re doing something right when the insane killer calls you a psycho |
![]() ![]() ![]() Noooo! Im finishedI hope it’s updated soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() No that poor little girlshe got opened up while alive?! Why must you be this cruel Author! Aww bro Six and Mynes reunion made my eyes a lil misty ngl |
![]() ![]() ![]() Noooooo Myne! Leave her alone you dickMy poor baby. Btw I feel like she’s just forgotten about her family. Ik you’re supposed to move on and everything, but I think the occasional comment about how her father would have loved doing something, her mother was always so and so and her sister would play with her, would help it not feel so jarring |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice Punisher reference lmao, literally exactly like the show |
![]() ![]() ![]() Bro you better not kill off Maaya… Awwww Myne is so fucking cute bro. Prime daughter example, she’s such a sweetheart |
![]() ![]() ![]() Bro the way you built up the family, made a connection between them and Six (and therefore us the readers) just to kill them! Beautiful writing |
![]() ![]() ![]() Boo fuckin hoo Blake. The White Fang aren’t misguided children, they’re fucking terrorists. |