Reviews for Mahou Senki Lyrical Nanoha : Clockwork
Guest chapter 17 . 8/28/2019
What an epic rollercoaster ride with orgasmic escalations. Every chapter Im thinking surely it can't get any more intense but the next chapter proves me wrong again and again. I was getting worried how you are going to bring it all down but you managed it and the ending scene where Nanoha takes on the entire Al Hazard is epic as fxxx. And the epilogue is just beautiful. Well done.
Qq chapter 17 . 8/5/2019
It’s so cool that Fate is simply ‘Boss’. So badass. It’s refreshing to read them as older, mature (well, Fate at least) ladies in this fic as well. A lot of other fics are set in their younger ages like teens or twenties so this is a nice change.
Someone64 chapter 14 . 7/20/2019
I would have to agree with Hayate. The malware that Teana came up with Jail was not what I was expecting. I was thinking more along the lines of incapacitating them magically, not raining extreme blaze from the sky. Well that kills my hopes of the clones getting a happy ending, though I can still hope for the ones that are still alive. Great work your doing so far.
phanc002 chapter 14 . 7/20/2019
omg this is just so sad and painful the whole picture is... poor girls.
Realistically I should expect Fate to go to Jail’s cell and shoot him then hang herself instead of sitting in the office counting invoices like that. I really hope she’ll make peace with her Mother and sisters (especially Red Ribbon whom she just failed) but it just seems too hard at this stage, considering she hasn’t done anything useful enough to help. With whom will her allegiance ultimately lie? Can’t wait to find out in the next chapters. Keep up the good work fam.
bubble.duckie chapter 3 . 7/15/2019
Very nice! I love this chapter very much. It’s just satisfyingly long chapter. Also Hayate is amazing. Her Bookworm self is just fantastic.
Someone64 chapter 13 . 7/15/2019
Ok I am loving every last bit of this story. Really hope that all the Alicia clones at least get a happy ending. Well the ones that are still alive that is.
Also I think that Nanoha is a lot stronger now since her fight against Vivio in the saints cradle. And I mean a lot stronger seeing that she just broke the bureau's ranking system and their limiters they had on her.
bubble.duckie chapter 1 . 7/9/2019
What a surprisingly lengthy chapter. I like it. It just sounds slightly rigid in some parts with regard to structure but overall, not bad I want to see NanoFate please!
Forum Explorer chapter 6 . 6/29/2019
Eh, I can't buy it. That Nanoha would snap and attack the clones. Considering the insane lengths she went through to save Fate in the first place, and how far she goes to not kill people in canon. If the clones were completely insane, maybe, but they aren't. They are arguably more communicative than Fate was.
Guest chapter 10 . 6/25/2019
I thought it was some writing mistakes in the previous chapters when you started to call the clones as Fates, Fate girls, Fate sisters and so on every now and then. Now looking back I realize it was only when Nanoha was fighting the clones. Very nice touch there.
Guest chapter 10 . 6/25/2019
OMG this is intense
Someone64 chapter 10 . 6/25/2019
Oh man, Nanoha is really going through a lot. Having to kill clones that look like your loved one over and over again can really put a lot of strain on the mind. Hope being grounded will help her collect herself if even by a bit.
Guest chapter 8 . 6/15/2019
“Teana, I'm pulling off the easiest undercover job in the history”

ROFL! My god, you probably get told this every chapter, but it’s hell of a roller coaster ride every time! It’s just action-packed and I’m left gasping for breath and eager for more after every chapter.
Guest chapter 6 . 6/8/2019
Heck. That clash between the titans Nanoha and Fate was quite breathtaking. Very suitably powerful and awe-inspiring. Had me at the edge of my seat. Wow. Excuse me I’m still recovering...

Btw Subaru was hilarious and also Teana in the preceding chapter seemed like she was the butt of the joke with her trying to get to vaizen and always failing hilariously lolz
Guest chapter 6 . 6/2/2019
"Raising Heart is heating up because Nanoha’s heart is raging" holy shit dude!
Guest chapter 6 . 6/1/2019
A very bad LOVER'S quarrel eh? I curios now... update soon?
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