Reviews for Harry Potter and the Responsibility of Ability |
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Guest chapter 6 . 4/26/2020 Glad Harry wasn't useless. Usuallly this scene in other fanfiction just has Harry tagging alone as extra and not contributing as much as the other avengers or contributing positively at all. This time it felt that Harry was doing several little thing's that contributed which is much better than the standard and made it feel like he had his place in the scenes too. Or simply that he belonged. |
Guest chapter 4 . 4/26/2020 Wizards are competent? Ok you're really impressing me. Not asking for them to be without faults or anythig but it's nice to read witches and wizards are too stupid to be interesting. |
Guest chapter 3 . 4/26/2020 AWESOME! A Harry Potter story where magic isn't more limited than modern consumer level technology! Loved all the thought and creativity that went into this, thanks for writing! |
mintushar844 chapter 3 . 4/22/2020 Pairing with nymphodora tonks will be good. |
The Emerald Blight chapter 9 . 3/4/2020 quite good I must say. liking that Harry has a wider access to magic than just his little world. bit of a sucker for pairings so I'm hoping you have one for Harry in the future. please update soon. |
SteckerHater chapter 9 . 2/10/2020 How have I not seen this story before? Very promising premises, quite original as well. Please update soon and keep up the good work! |
K. M. Donovan chapter 9 . 2/10/2020 open office is a piece of crap a lot of the time. free though it is, the program can be buggy as hell. and certain version do NOT like updating at all. but it is one of the closest programs to Microsoft Word, without costing anything. i actually used Wordpad to write my first fics... that was annoying. but at least it wasn't notepad. anyways, liking the fic, and am looking forwards to reading more. though i would suggest a different name for harry's alias. Raven is becoming overdone for Harry Potter/avengers fics. personally i recommend Archon, if i remember, Archon's were a kind of powerful wisemans, often associated with magic and the occult. hell, in some lore, Archon holds similar meaning to being called a "Grand Mage" or a "High Sorcerer". so it is at least appropriate. and unique. now i could be very wrong in my interpretation of the origins of the word so DO NOT QUOTE ME ON THAT! sorry, all of that is my own speculation and opinion. if you want proof of the origins of the word Archon? google it. i am merely making a suggestion. use it, dont, i dont much care either way. i just felt it was more unique then Raven. which honestly is stolen from DC comics, and the only reason people call him that is because everyone seems to be fond of making him a raven animagus. anyways, enjoyed the fic. cant wait to read more. thank you for your time. |
N7 Greek-Valkyrie chapter 9 . 1/5/2020 This is like the fourth story I've read where his code name is Raven, can it be something more original? Aside from that, nice intro. |
N7 Greek-Valkyrie chapter 4 . 1/5/2020 Ooooh he met Logan (Wolverine) and he doesn't know it. Sweet, I rarely see the X-Men mentioned in crossovers with the Avengers. |
N7 Greek-Valkyrie chapter 3 . 1/5/2020 I kinda ship Harry and Tonks right now, just saying. |
Guest chapter 7 . 12/31/2019 Alright so here we go. I got some pros and cons here for you Pro: Good storytelling your writing is good, your structure is good sentences etc Con: Really not enjoying your over usage of Kamar-Taj magic you have completely rewritten harry into a new character hes not really harry potter anymore hes someone else, there are plenty of ways he could have cleared the portal enough for stark to get through with harry potter magic, Fiendfyre for example (it can be controlled and destroyed if you know what you are doing) Pros:I really liked your hints and inclusions of the X-men, they are my favorite marvel team Con: When you doubled the amount of Aliens that made it through the portal I was hoping that this was because The X-men would show up, I was a little disappointed that they did not. Pros: I am really glad you arn't trending in the annoying and quite frankly disgusting fanfiction trend of pairings and shipping, good job for not doing that. |
Guest chapter 1 . 12/30/2019 Pretty good first chapter, am not the biggest fan of the reason for him heading to the states, and what I mean by that is him studying in Kamar Taj, just not really a fan. I feel like a better reason would be that "dimensional energy" is something that is... maybe being studied in the Department of Mysteries? that would be interesting and make for sense. |
StarwindX chapter 2 . 12/23/2019 Hmm. Interesting idea. Maybe have Harry be so involved with Avengers he just doesnt care about head Auror spot anymore? Pairing wise - Natasha? |
Tharshalaya chapter 9 . 12/23/2019 This is a really good cross over. Keep posting. |
Crossxx chapter 9 . 12/13/2019 Grate story, I love it, I can't wait for more. |