Why'd you have to add Tonks and have such good chemistry with Harry. Making me wanna read some honks fics.

This story is amazing! Very, very well written and I am eagerly awaiting what comes next

Saw your comment on Reddit about the story! The story is excellent so far. Looking forward to how it plays out.

I'm really happy to have found this story. I'm really loving your interpretation of everyone involved so far, especially your version of a Harry that's come into his own. I tend to enjoy OP MoD Harry's in general but your version of a Harry that found himself, what he wanted to do with his life, and decided to keep growing is really fun. I'm definitely looking forward to more. Thanks so much for writing it. :)

Yo, have I ever mentioned how much I love this story? 'Cause I do. I really, really do. XD Harry's a badass.

Excelente capítulo e excelente história em geral!
Estou ansioso pelos próximos capítulos.

I really like this story! It'll be interesting to see just how Harry changes the story and contributes as an Avenger. I also loved Harry's parting words. He's going to drive Tony crazy, I can feel it.

I'm not sure how much you're changing, but I hope you decide to come up with your own dialogue instead of falling back on movie lines quoted verbatim like so many other fics seem to. I've gotten to the point where if I see movie lines, I just skip until I hit something new.

Anyway, I hope you keep updating and finish this fic.

Hmm... this chapter was honestly pretty weak, which is disappointing considering how unique you made the rest. It falls firmly into the realm of "I'm just writing this so I can get to the parts of plot that I care about", and the scenes and dialogue suffered for it. Very little shown beyond Harry being a seemingly-inconsequential assistant in the battle, the team jumping straight past any sort of introduction character/relationship development, and then scrambling the plots of subsequent movies. If you can't even write a unique scene for this Avenger's battle (ending it before the nuke would have at least changed things), then I'm leery that you'll manage with the subsequent films' contents.

Oh well. Good luck with your writing!

*If they had reached terminal velocity he was sure he'd be dead.*

Well... duh. Hitting the ground from any height at the kind of speed necessary for terminal velocity (assuming you aren't treating Tony's aerodynamic suit as having tons of drag) would be deadly. The fact Harry was barely injured by, at minimum, several hundred pounds of suit and man landing on his chest is ridiculous enough as is.

Love the Wolverine cameo, kudos. Story's pretty decent so far, but I'm not sure how you'll blend the collective 'histories' of the different fandoms if it ever comes up (Grindewald/Hydra/etc.).

I'm enjoying this story. I can't wait for more!

Liking the story, thus far. Looking forward to how it develops!

Great CHapter!

A.N. makes me feel much better about your potential pacing, and this chapter had some very well-written slice-of-life fluff. Interesting that Tonks is rooming at Grimmauld place, but it seems like a good choice for a couple friendly-but-unattached people.

Nothing new or innovative in this chapter, but definitely high quality writing. Don't focus on length. There are some authors that slog out 500k words for their fics, and get basically no readers because it's either poorly-written, has no substance, and/or is too generic. Making the fic interesting is FAR more important than making it long.

Love the fic start and the fact that you're aware of how certain repeated scenes add nothing to the narrative. HOWEVER, I'm a bit leery that you'll start the next chapter off with Tonks and Teddy. They aren't nearly as "obligatory-to-be-interacted-with" as Ron and Hermione, so unless they play a role in this story, I fear that scene will add nothing to the plot. Still, I guess time will tell. Gonna read the rest of this later.

If you find yourself getting bogged in details, I'd suggest writing more chapters just like this first one. "Scene what the characters have been doing what they are doing now showing character growth". It works well for cutting through the minutiae.