Reviews for The Problem With You
Dane Youssef chapter 5 . 4/26/2011
See, this is so damned beautiful. So perfect, it hurts. It breaks your heart and warms it all at once.

My God, why couldn't the official pros write anything this good? See, there's a reason the show was so prematurely cancelled. This is art. This is special. I could see it all.

I hope a lot of your finer writers (than the ones writing these shows for real) will someday publish a book of work this fine. You especially, eccentric.

See, this is EXACTLY WHY the faithful followers stopped rooting for Jake and Dylan and started to root for Jake and Penny instead. We had to.

This is magic. Your magic...

-A New Faithful Fan (and Lover), Dane Youssef
4th6thDoc chapter 5 . 5/18/2005
The Jake/Penny ship is the only real one. This was excellent, you captured Jake and Penny well.

I'd sure like a sequel, huzzah! Write, write, write.
Polly-Nightwings chapter 5 . 11/2/2004
Hey! update, update! I read this recently...just now! So pardon me for not reviewing before...hehe...anywayz...please update! You're a good're very good at displaying emotions, and story flow! Please continue!
i02heydude chapter 5 . 12/4/2003
definitely write a sequel! this was awesome
mel chapter 5 . 11/1/2003
Wait you have to write more..I came aboard late an love it. I need to know iof they hook up..Please write more.
LoveUnitesAll chapter 5 . 10/8/2003
yea Yea yea yea yea sequel good sequel very good write sequel please i loved the ending though
alanisjunkie chapter 5 . 10/8/2003
dude it was good but you definitely need to follow up. i wanna know what's gonna happen
keenan chapter 5 . 10/7/2003
u better write a sequel. lol we need more stories comeon write a sequel i kno u want to lol i loved the story. it was great. ur good at writin fics so u better make a sequel lol i quit buggin u
Alyson chapter 5 . 10/7/2003
I love this story! It was really great. One of the better PJ ones! I wish they had really ended up together though.
Alyx7 chapter 4 . 10/6/2003
Gah! I just *hate* it when guys get all insensitive like of my *definate* turn-OFFS.
Alyx7 chapter 3 . 10/6/2003
"It's Dylan"?

D amn (pardon my french). Talk about a mood breaker...
Alyx7 chapter 2 . 10/6/2003
Hee. The part where Jake's telling Penny she should just tell 'the guy' she has a crush on her feelings was kinda funny, in a humorously ironic sort of way...
Alyx7 chapter 1 . 10/6/2003
Penny, hun-there's somethin' you oughta know: *Denial* ain't no river in Egypt, ye know?
Alyx7 chapter 5 . 10/6/2003
"The end."?

"Did I piss you off yet?"? don't know the half o' it.


Grr. Poor Penny. Guys can be *so* clueless sometimes...

Sequel please!
Beckinsale chapter 5 . 10/6/2003
Gr! Kathleen. Gr! But I already told you that. Yes, I want a sequel. Do you know why? Because this is so sad. How could you do it? How? Okay, I understand "why." But I'm asking "how"?

But onto a more review-ish type comment. Great as usual, Kathleen. And yes, you did *tick* me off. But evoking emotions is a good thing for a writer to do. So, yeah. Great chapter. Great fic. I'm gonna go cry now.
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