Reviews for A Fair Life
Guest chapter 16 . 11/16
vswey chapter 5 . 10/31
is this meant as a Crack fiction or is it supposed to be serious?
It's a cool twist to the challenge but so much of the first few chapters seem sort of parody/Crack, maybe just a bit ham-fisted. and Harleen? Harleen Janine? lol it's like a bad Stan Lee knock off name that went for rhyming over alliteration. seriously though that name is so jarring, i know you made the name starting with 'H' being one reason why the death dude didnt notice but why not Harley? or just anything else.

tldr; cool premise and story for the most part so far, though feels a bit of a parody at times. and the names, ugh.
IamNOTawriter chapter 16 . 10/27
Given the last update stamp, I'm a latecomer to your party.
Thank you for a well written and engaging story (so far). You have taken what I believe is a unique approach the Female Harry, and made it work. Both from believable mechanics for the change, and her character reactions to it.
Believe me, there are very few Female Harry stories that have caught my attention the way this one has. Thank you.
I am not in the habit of chapter by chapter reviews. I understand that some chapters are needed to set the stage for later events and may not have as much action as some people seem to desire. Reviews based on the incomplete story, seem to sway some authors away from their own unique approach, to something that panders to the majority of their reviewers. They usually lose what made them interesting in the process.
Thanks again for an enjoyable read.
SarcasticallySatyrical chapter 16 . 10/13
Love this, lol. The perfect blend of angst and humor!
CoSmO333 chapter 16 . 9/25
this was wonderful!
kayleebonita19 chapter 16 . 9/24
Please please please update
Panther1440 chapter 16 . 9/8
Maaaaaaan, what a place to end it. Granted, I really enjoyed what there is so far.
perbrethil chapter 16 . 9/1
I normally don't post reviews, but this story is incredible and i'm heartbroken it isn't finished. this is easily the second best female harry story i've ever read and i think maybe even the best reptilla28 story. I sincerely hope this will be updated someday, i'm gonna cry in a corner now.
winniesm chapter 8 . 8/16
i don't know whether you're a guy or girl, but no girl will willingly go to sleep in her bra.
winniesm chapter 6 . 8/16
this complaining contrary Harry is so fucking tiresome. challenging every single thing. what a waste of everyone's time
BlindFaunusGirl chapter 16 . 8/15
Enjoyable story have reread it a few times, hoping you return to the story some day.
mrmayortheiv chapter 4 . 8/3
This is a great story so far, but thank God for the word replacer extension on Chrome. I can't get immersed in a story about fem-H-a-r-r-y , if I have to read his canon name every time it's mentioned. I'm literally incapable of interpreting that name or any of its variants (...Harri-et comes to mind) as a female character.

Anyone reading this comment who feels the same way, try it out! For me her name is Jasmine, dammit, and I will bend the internet to suit my needs!
cloverskye chapter 16 . 7/27
While I adored this ending, more please!? This is honestly seriously competing for my favorite fics ever category!

I'm honestly not even sure why exactly. It's not ridiculously outside the norm from some of the other fics I've read. It doesn't really challenge any of expectations as some fics have. Maybe it's just your individual characterisations. They feel almost completely in line with how I would want the characters to feel. Add to that how well your words flow to make it so easy to read, the clever plot twists, and the dialogue itself being so good, and it really makes for a great fic!
LordNemesis chapter 16 . 6/19
Even though I think this story was forgotten about It a great story and I would love to see it finished. It has some very funny parts.
sakurai.ryuu chapter 16 . 6/19
when update :(
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