Reviews for The Death Knights |
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![]() ![]() What an OOC mess. |
![]() ![]() I am loving this deliciously dark tale. Can’t wait to see how the family deals with everyone. Super excitied about the next update. And congrats on your new kitten. Regulus is a purr-fect name. |
![]() ![]() ![]() While I am dissapointed about this not being an update... I geditnoding my head, looking all wise and understanding* Best wishes to young Regulus the fighter. I hope he gets better soon *thumbs up* |
![]() ![]() ![]() looking forward for next update really liking this story |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thank you. I have been wanting a well written Dark Harmony story for a long time now. The only way it could be better would be I'd it was a Dark Lunar Harmony, but that's just my personal opinion. I wish you and Regulas the best of luck. I have to ask though, you have the family discussing things in front of wormtail that could have him putting things together or at least raising suspicions. Now, I have no idea what you have planned so it may be nothing to worry about but I just didn't want you unknowingly leaving a plot hole. Once again thank you for the story and beat wishes for Regulas. Love the story and can't wait for the next chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww, hope the little guy gets better, and love the name choice. Take the time you need, can't wait for the next chapter though. |
![]() ![]() Excellent visit at the book store! Most productive. So, once they have the book and locket, that will be three horcruxes acquired! (Four if you count Harry) Are you going to have Sirius disown Bella and Narcissa, and reinstate Andromeda and Tonks? I wonder if the cup could be recovered as part of the dowry since they didn't produce heirs. Can't wait to read your plans! |
![]() ![]() Me again, this was nice. I perhaps would have enjoyed you actually showing some things they went over with the goblins, what did he claim?is adding them to the vault all he did? does he have his key or does Molly? Otherwise loving the story though! |
![]() ![]() Ah, I'm in love so far. However, a suggestion? Nothing to do with the writing, but.. between scenes (like where viv was with Draco and then it cuts to Ron asking about the resistance) would it be possible to get a line break? Or some marker of a scene change? Just to make it flow a bit better. If you don't like that it's fine without it :) |
![]() ![]() I love this story. It’s so interesting. You’re doing an amazing job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() That end was beautiful. Keep up with the great work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I don't know where you are going with this story. But I don't think this is the type of fan fic anyone would want to steal. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this story so much, and honestly can't wait to see what your planning for the school and for little Malfoy. I just can't wait for Malfoy and really everybody to be put in their place, especially Snape. I can just imagine Snapes' face as they thoroughly slap him down after all his bs. Good job on the confrontation of the Malfoys, i liked how they couldn't really get an upperhand in on the conversation. Keep up the goodwork, i think your doing amazing. P.S I really love how long the chapters are. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love the way they handled both Lockhart and the Malfoy's. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Now this chapter was epic. I loved all the taunting. I can't wait for the birthday party. |