Reviews for 47 The Long, Harsh Road
Professorelectron chapter 29 . 12/13/2022
nothing new basically rewrite of canon
Rossitis chapter 34 . 12/3/2022
If he’s not going to at all, address it or follow up on it, then why bother having his mother giving him a warning about an asgardian being near? That doesn’t make bloody sense. And how is he so ignorant of Ron’s speech patterns?
Rossitis chapter 31 . 12/3/2022
It’s surprising that loki hasn’t picked up on the fact that Ron is Thor considering the warning he got from Lily and the fact that he speaks so differently from his siblings.
Rossitis chapter 20 . 11/30/2022
Loki seems disappointingly weak to me here.
Rossitis chapter 13 . 11/28/2022
The way Ron talks, I am assuming that he’s somehow Thor?
Andrew234 chapter 12 . 11/14/2022
he's the God damned God of mischief and magic but still depending on Ron to kill the troll
Andrew234 chapter 9 . 11/13/2022
the rat broke it up just like Canon?
Andrew234 chapter 9 . 11/13/2022
for a harry potter who is has the memories of a Norse God he's acting exactly the same as regular Harry Louis fatal flaw was pride how is he just completely empty of pride no way even a loki with one single memory of asgard would not do something sick and twisted at being called a mudblood
J flood chapter 1 . 10/31/2022
dear author of this story. I am not read your story yet I just turned to it and I'm telling you right now I started listening to your story and the first thing I hear is that people are griping against you over things they can't control nor do they have the right to gripe at you about things like this really pick me up because you guys put so much work in these stories and it's pathetic that people that can't just read the story and enjoyed and they don't move on to something. and to all those drugs that give the Arthur rights over this story grow up if you don't like a story don't read it it's not that hard to switch to a different story just because you aren't the story written in a certain way doesn't mean you're going to get it unless you write it yourself so if you don't like his story going right one yourself and I'll be perfect.
J flood chapter 1 . 10/31/2022
I take it there's a lot of people out there and they give you rot about this that and everything well my message did then is grow up it's his story he writes it his way and if you don't like it don't read it
RatherFabulous chapter 14 . 8/23/2022
It’s hardly surprising that he doesn’t recognize “Ron” for his brother. Who thinks that?
Please read me chapter 169 . 8/18/2022
How can something that is dead inside live, Harry Potter was literally trained in the first timeline for the sole purpose of being a disposable one use time weapon and guess what Harry Potter miraculously survived again for like the 80th time that put an itch in dumbledore's craw, the only path forward Harry Potter has is fighting war as soon as war and death become redundant and are erased Harry Potter will literally act like a puppet with strings cut because that's all he knows he can feel some stuff but meh doesn't have any role models in every stat he's in he is stuck at factory settings, personality, mentality, cognitivity, adaptability, understanding, wisdom, knowledge of self, these things are supposed to be talk to you when you're young it was only thanks to magic that Harry Potter doesn't have to be on some sort of life support that would make him a cyborg to even get Harry Potter to answer yes or no questions and 99% of the time he answers would be
meh and the answers are always disappointing and absolutely useless to those ones asking the questions and or the ones that are ultimately asking the ones to ask the questions also you wouldn't have any arms or legs cuz how many times his arms and legs have been broken repeatedly without healing properly been in the hospital since two or three years old at most at least since he's was a baby his immune system would have been blown out since he was a baby at least at most a two-year-old so he would have to live in a bloody bubble on top of that you would probably have 273 physical disabilities involving both the mind and then body mind connection something something dyslexia something something severe severe memory cognitive disability something something etc etc etc etc etc etc etc etc etc etc etc etc etc etc etc etc etc etc etc etc etc etc etc etc etc etc etc etc etc etc etc etc etc etc etc etc etc etc etc etc etc etc etc etc etc etc etc etc etc etc etc etc etc etc etc etc etc etc etc etc etc etc etc etc etc etc etc etc etc. Not only that but his magic was amping up Harry Potter's look to one forth the level of liquid luck just so Harry Potter wouldn't die and then you got a factor in 200,000,000 other things that Harry Potter has to deal with then you have to factor in all the other things Dumbledore did behind Harry's back and then Harry Potter has to deal with the discrimination and racism and all around idiocy of The wizarding world then there's the douchebags that assholes or thieves those liars and dark s*** in the woodwork and stuff that just doesn't make sense. On top of that everything in life made him a puppet Dumbledore was literally guiding Harry by the nose if Harry Potter is supposed to be Voldemort's equal or dumbledore's equal and or the combined equal to both Voldemort and Dumbledore combined and since Harry Potter is nowhere close at all and I mean at all I mean Dumbledore is like what 200 years old 250 years old he has like 200,000 million spells 200,000 million curses 2,000 million jinxes 2000 million charms 2000 million whatever and he's got access to a near unlimited supply of tomes for like 70 maybe 60% of his life which means he's constantly studying for that point in time and the same thing could be applied for Voldemort maybe 80 70 for him their power levels are obviously strong in really different ways once a manipulator the other one is a tank with a Gatling gun type of missile launcher able to fire over 2,000 million billion different types of rounds and each has mass accelerators in it that is a metaphor oh yeah and the tank in this metaphor has like extra thick alien armor that you can't figure out that much and it has hover and fly capabilities in that metaphor and it can use multiple types of detection like Sonic and heat and night vision etc etc etc etc etc for this metaphor and going against these two beings of pillars of power of this society politically PR as well as physical magical power and their skill level in their chosen fields of use is unbelievable now how can a scrawny little mostly starved in multiple ways and not just physically little boy stand a chance of being the equal to that he can't he just can't.
Miguel Castro2 chapter 9 . 8/12/2022
Ron was way to smart and harry way too submissive
Dragonhulk chapter 10 . 7/21/2022
Heh, this must be the most highly educated and polite 10 year olds in existence. I can accept Harry and speaking so differently but I'm wondering what makes Ron so special. Still it's a great concept and I'm looking forward to seeing where it goes.
DarkSwanQueen777 chapter 147 . 7/10/2022
I can't believe I made myself get this far. this is not good at all. I hoped it would be different from the store but what was the point on making Harry Loki if Loki just ends up doing what Harry would do? sigh oh well time wasted indeed
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