|Reviews for This Can't Be Good|
| Guest chapter 6 . 9/30/2020
This is maybe the fourth or fifth time I’ve read this fic and I keep meaning to tell you how much I love it, and I’m excited enough about the Inuyasha anime sequel that I’m finally doing it. I really really really love this fic of yours. The characters are so well written and it’s an incredibly fun premise, your writing is amazing- I wish I could write like you. I fully intend to read your Lucifer ficus soon, I love that show.
| May525 chapter 2 . 9/7/2020
New to the Inuyasha fics. But yes! Why don't more people mention it?
| Golden Tiger93 chapter 51 . 4/12/2020
Question: Was Hojo the reincarnation of Miroku's master?
| ReadingThrill chapter 51 . 1/2/2020
Uwu I've finally finished and I have to say this sorry was.. Pretty amazing with the plot twists and all- However, I also have a little problem following in certain parts, like who's saying what sometimes. Nonetheless, I love how involved Miroku was in this and I love how you portrayed the characters so well!
| Freefan1412 chapter 51 . 12/13/2018
You know I don't even remember what I expected when I started this story, but it certainly wasn't this. :)
While a bit difficult to follow in the beginning, that's mostly because of how intense this story is - the characters and how you write them. The plot isn't largely complicated or long for a story that's over 100k, but it doesn't seem that way because of, again, that intensity. It's well worth the read. I enjoyed it a great deal. It was incredibly hilarious in parts, touching in others, sweet, tense or exciting in yet others. The misunderstandings, the broken moments, the slow burn, the Kikyo-Inuyasha-Kagome triangle with just enough bitterness. The way Hojo just got on every guy's nerves without even trying. XD
I promptly went looking if you've got other stories this long, it was such a great read. :)
| Guest chapter 51 . 11/28/2018
The twist was pretty good, but the style you wrote it in is quite confusing.
| Guest chapter 42 . 11/27/2018
I still don't know why Inuyasha didn't just tell Kagome.
| Guest chapter 30 . 11/27/2018
So why hasn't Inuyasha told Kagome that Hojo want to kill Shippo yet?
Other than for plot purposes, I mean.
| Guest chapter 29 . 11/27/2018
What the fuck is going on?
| Guest chapter 15 . 11/27/2018
While your story is funny, it is often hard to understand. You need to include a bit more detail. I'm sure you have it in your head about what is going on, but it isn't clearly written out.
For example, I don't know who is saying what, and when a person interrupt his own thoughts, I don't know what the completion is supposed to be.
| WolfishMoon chapter 51 . 9/10/2018
"I wouldn't mind being reborn as one"
... I can't believe I didn't pick that up. What a twist. Really well done. Loved it.
| Mischievious Kiss27 chapter 51 . 10/15/2017
I started this story just a few days ago, and I thought I knew what I could expect going in. Inuyasha's jealousy, Kagome trying to keep the peace, Hojo stumbling wide-eyed through this world and Kagome's secret life having to be babysat to avoid death.
Even when things became so much more complicated and darker, I thought I could at least make out the resolution.
I was so wrong. I've spent an hour just sitting here and piecing everything together in my head, staring at my phone like a moron.
Take solace, Miroku; you're not the only fool caught in the middle.
This was so well done I don't even know how to begin praising you for it.
| Lola chapter 45 . 9/20/2017
Miroku, the lonely old man.
Ouch. I felt Miroku'd pain
| kstewdeux chapter 1 . 8/13/2017
If I haven't commented on this before it is to my shame for I reread it often. I've been writing my own stories and I realized how much I've neglected telling people how much I love theirs. So here I go, IT IS AWESOME! Carry on!
| Marie-S-Raven chapter 1 . 6/2/2017
Oh man, I'd love to see more on this story, especially of Inuyasha and Kagome! Thank you for writing!