Reviews for This Can't Be Good
TripOverFlatSurfaces chapter 51 . 5/12/2012
Wha..? No way, Hojo was Mushin's reincarnation? That's... That was the point of him traveling back in time? Wow, that just kind of came out of nowhere. Or maybe not; since you left it at a cliffhanger, I'm so confused! Was he Mushin's reincarnation? Was that the purpose he was sent back for? To, and I quote, "give him a chance to say what he needed to say"?
Phoenix Satori chapter 11 . 4/30/2012
you know what i love?

coming back to an old, well-loved story, and finding that, in spite of the inevitable vicissitudes (time, changing tastes and fandoms, etc), i still love it every bit as much as i did the first time i read it.

this is still batty and off-the-wall and clever and hilarious and perfect.

cheers, you glorious dear, you.
Loafy chapter 1 . 3/14/2012
Should I feel bad for wishing Hobo would be flambeed by a passing bug?

No, I don't think so either. Hatred is a perfectly natural reaction.

Now for the real question: Is it normal to hate a nice guy so much, or is something seriously wrong with me?

I like the concept lots! I can only get better from here!
Louise chapter 51 . 1/22/2012
oh...

Oh...

OH...

OH GODZ...

'I get this chill in my heart, as if someone's walking over my grave'

Shippou, walking over Mushins grave.

'Maybe that's why. I was allowed through the well because my incarnation had died, and I can't get back because there's a new baby me being born in the future.'

Mushin dying.

'I shouldn't feel as if I owe him, but I feel I do.'

Mirokus obligation to owe Hojo.

Impossible.

15/10

You. Are. Genious.
YuniX-2 chapter 51 . 12/31/2011
HOLY EXPLETIVES. Wow, the ending was brilliant. Both out of left field but delicately woven into the story at the same time. To think, the reason Hojo came to the past was to fulfill Mushin's wish to warn Miroku. I suppose it was also to learn some things for himself. But wow. That is mysterious and beautiful.
Cats chapter 51 . 12/5/2011
That was brilliant. Absolutely brilliant. My only regret is being unable to nominate it for some sort of award.
lexi chapter 51 . 11/20/2011
that.. was a mindfuck of an ending... enjoyed this story, do keep writing, you have talent!
ninjapuppies chapter 51 . 11/19/2011
My god..this is the best story I have ever read. Yeah there wasn't much inu/kag romance but I was still intrigued..it got me thinking..so hojo was mushin reincarnated. What a twist. Great job
Viking Eggplant chapter 51 . 11/18/2011
This was just a fantastic read! So funny, but in character and with so much heart! I very much enjoyed it ).
The Mightier Pen chapter 51 . 11/6/2011
the first time i read this i didnt get all the way through. the second time i read this i thought it was okaay. the third time i read this i realized it was actully pretty good! i think this story could use a little editing, maybe cut it down a little but i like it overall.
therentyoupay chapter 15 . 2/21/2011
LOVE IT.
therentyoupay chapter 12 . 2/21/2011
What is between Hojo and Shippo? I'm so curious!
therentyoupay chapter 11 . 2/21/2011
Oh, Hojo...
therentyoupay chapter 10 . 2/21/2011
I love how you portray Inuyasha's ability to rationalize his feelings for Kagome! And hilarious crack about neutering Hojo.
therentyoupay chapter 9 . 2/21/2011
Cute! I want to know what Hojo is thinking of Shippo...
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