This is a good story, I hope there is more than 17 chapters, maybe 100, lol I think Harry Potter and dolphin green grass is a good match, the young Harry, please let me know if there will be more chapters and please let me know what the name of all your at the books are so I can look them up and read them, thank you

Chapter? the WHOLE fragging story rocked

it would be interesting in the future if maybe you ever decided to revisit this series, it would be interesting to go to other phantoms like you’re currently doing with marvel, maybe DC and all that. Something to change it up I believe but understandable that you don’t want to continue the series it kind of got written into a hole in its end.

How is three houses together in 1 class? Where is ravenclaw? And harry just sidelined his house and Susan

Lol, great ending of the chapter.

Great chapter,I don't review much I just enjoy reading the stories. I'll definitely be reading your other stories. Thanks.

A bit short but still another great story !

Well it's sad that this fic seems to have the same problem as the 1st one of this serie. Not so much in the second as there was no Dumby/Ron/hermione to bash. Sorry to say, bashing is not your strong point.

I mean, making the same characters repeating the same thing over and over again gets boring really quick (or maybe it's because I read your 250k-words fanfic in less than a day ?), plus they don't get any growth (at least in the previous ones, we'll see for this one but as it is much shorter, I would not expect any focus on their potential growth).

Anyway, imho, we're a bit too close to parody for my liking (the issue being, the bashed characters are the only that would fit into "parody", which makes it a bit weird).

I've read almost all your other fics so, i'd say this was because it was one of your first fics, I mean, I don't recall having this problem with Apex, which has a lot of bashing too iirc, but I still really like your stories, you're a great writter (still a lot of typos but, again, I don't remember having that problem with your more recent fanfictions), so, thank you for sharing your works.

"when he came finished taking some more galleons from the vault he had taken the cart back up after thanking the goblin in charge of the cart(.. that's some heavy sentence lmao . Why not go with "once he was done"? It's much lighter and easier to understand.

Yas! Let’s go

Oh my god this is so interesting. You want my help in imagining what Henry did to Umbrige? Imagine Alastar with hid devilish voice and growing taller when he is angry. Add two glowing deadly green eyes. Now turn him into Henry how you woul imagine him to look. Done.

Amei

What a fun story! I'm glad that Harry could have a nearly wonderful childhood with loving gardians and friends!

Thank you for the story. I enjoyed it very much.

My second time reading this series was quite enjoyable. I must agree with you that it is better to end a story than leave it unfinished. I myself have written one, but some things aren't going as I originally intended, and may have to restart it with a clearer outline of some of the conversations. Thank you for a very good series and quite imaginable as well.

Arkronicus