i love this but maven would defintley always win chess its his thing

Noooo :( it’s too bad there wasn’t a happy ending, I mean the actual book already ended sadly I just want a happy ending :( oh well, it was still good till the very end, I absolutely loved it! The ending was just ahhhhhhh. Poor Cal, and Maven :( thanks for finishing it tho, loved it!

Oh nooo the final? :( oh well, this was so good I’m really enjoying it! Yay I’m so glad I’m finally getting to see the conclusion to this! Awesome job!

Second review! Seriously, this is great! You should know that from all of the RQ fanfics I've read, this is definitely one of the best. Your writing style flows really well, and you keep your story interesting. It's obvious that you have a talent, so keep at it. I can't wait to see where this story goes! There aren't enough stories about the Calore brothers out there.

Wow. I am really enjoying this. You are clearly a good writer, and I'm going on to the next chapter right now! Keep on writing! :)

Loved it! I can’t believe you updated after nearly a year omg! I really hope the next comes out sooner but totally take your time! This chapter stole my breath away and I was anxiously waiting for what was to happen. Now I can’t wait for more this is such an amazing story and you’re doing such a wonderful job! Thanks so much for updating!

wow please don’t...
If you still care

I like where this is going, but I hope the chapter(s) in the future are longer than this one.

I really like this. Don’t make him kill Maven... that wouldn’t be much of a conversation after all. I’m excited for more, I can’t wait to see where you go with this. It would be awesome if you continued it.

I am interested to read more of this. It's interesting to see this kind of interaction between Cal and Maven.

Ooh I like this. Your writing style is very nice. I think Cal should still cling on to the hope that there is a way to save Maven.