Reviews for The Mannis with a Plannis
TheHamtaro chapter 14 . 12/23/2024
It's pretty darn nice.
amk41196 chapter 14 . 10/12/2024
So sad this fic seems abandoned...
Guest chapter 2 . 8/20/2024
Ammonia is not only inefficient to synthesize, given that you need to set up an electrolytic cell, but I think it would be easier to just use the Boudouard reaction to make carbon monoxide. MC might need to rob a blacksmith for the carbon, but other than that, it's a fairly seamless process, and best of all, the victims won't actually smell the poison. The scent of ammonia might alert them.
Guest chapter 2 . 8/20/2024
An electrolytic cell to extract the chlorine gas before you react it with NaOH to form hypochlorite ion? Not bad, mate. Chemistry looks pretty good.

Though this also seems horribly inefficient, given the equipment your MC has to work with. And they're going to smell it before it kills them.
6lakH2O SA chapter 14 . 5/16/2024
As silly as it was this fic was a fun read... so sad to see it abandoned and dead
Guest chapter 14 . 11/23/2023
Weird fic. You base a sizable part of it on obscure fanons. Bloodraven wanting to be an eternal king and being Euron's mentor? Where did you even get that?
Ningen life chapter 10 . 11/14/2023
Bloodraven wasn't even born during the Dance of the Dragons yet. You're talking about the Blackfyre Rebellions
Ningen life chapter 2 . 11/14/2023
Eh, Westerosi in general looked down on poisons a lot. Stannis wouldn't be getting a good rep for using one. They might call him dishonorable at best.
juanperez299992 chapter 14 . 10/21/2023
good SI
Guest chapter 14 . 8/6/2023
amazing story
kageknuser2710 chapter 4 . 4/20/2023
I really liked the interaction with Aurane!
kageknuser2710 chapter 2 . 4/20/2023
I love this! This was such a good showing from Stannis!
Kahlan C chapter 14 . 3/29/2023
Me encanta tu historia. Siempre es bueno que Stannis sea más reconocido y obtenga lo que merece.

Que Robbert lo envidie y tenga celos es divertidísimo, aunque me entristeció que la relación con Renly se rompiera. Es decir, todo lo que escribiste parecía apuntar a que Stannis se preocupa por él; así que esperaba que por lo menos se despidiera e intentara mantenerse en contacto.

Toda su aventura fuera de Poniente ha sido genial, muestras lo que ha aprendido y la experiencia que ha ganado. Confieso que su relación con Melissandre me da repelús. Y sus labios azules no me gustan para nada. Aparte de que al verlos le daría a Stannis un aire de enfermo, la idea de que se haya vuelto un adicto choca con la idea tan disciplinada de su caracter.

En fin, gracias por la historia, espero que algún día encuentres tiempo e inspiración para continuar.
Guest chapter 4 . 2/8/2023
I'm guessing ur the same author who made that Eddard Baratheon fic
jack gofyourself chapter 14 . 12/19/2022
cannons are the only gunpowder weapons that should ever be added, if you add muskets then half this story wouldve been useless, with muskets you dont need unsullied or a well trained army, any tom dick and harry can use a musket after a week of training. please dont add muskets, only large cannons or maybe some small swivel guns for ships (the tiny cannons)
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