Very nice.

Thank you for writing,

Ron

This is so great! Thanks for sharing

Y'know, calling Lord Greengrass a baboon isn't a bad insult, if you consider what a male baboon looks like in rut...he could just show her a glossy of the thing's hind end...

hmmm, I definitely appreciate the story as a good piece of storytelling, but it feels lacking compared to the other works of yours that I have read that are far higher quality than this. In my opinion you kind of forced events to happen, and didn't utilize your chapter breaks as well as you could have.

.Draco has a valid reason to insult Harry. When they first met, Draco offered his hand and friendship to Harry, who refused the offer and refused to even shake Draco's hand. Duels to the death have been fought over less vicious insults than that. And because Draco, like Astoria, was unaware Harry wasn't properly educated, Draco reacted the way he would to another pureblood doing it, while Harry had no clue he had deliberately made a deadly enemy for life!

This is the best of all the great stories of yours that I’ve read so far. Many many thanks.

I know it has been a while since you wrote this, but Nathaniel Greengrass is still one of my favorite characters ever. This is a delightful tale and I would love to see more stories with Nathaniel in them.

Very good story.
Thank you for writing it.

this was a fun read

Fun story. Short and sweet. I liked how you tied in the "junior members can't harm senior members" plot point from the beginning with the end.

Fantastic storyline, writing was excellent

This is great!

Fun story i liked it thanks

This was an absolutely brilliant oneshot. I loved every single moment of it.

Great job,

Lahmikhara

I love this story.