Love the story so much. Masterfully written and realistic!

This ending is better than the original one. Splendidly written. A great stroy. I disagree with the ending, though. It seems contrary to Naruto's character.

Everything was top tier. You fumbled the bag with that ending.

Kakashi always seemed so wise and knowledgeable? Kakashi? I don't think we watched the same canon. Seriously though, very good end to the story!

Omg, Naruto is so pathetically weak here, so much so that it is actually outstanding. Like it’s more impressive to make him this weak than to make him somewhat strong. Here, Naruto is much much much weaker than his canon self. He is weaker in mentality and combat strength, I don’t even know why he is a candidate for the Hokage position when he is so weak. The Hokage position should’ve immediately gone to Shino. Pathetic from Naruto.

Fantastic fanfiction. Splendidly written with great character portrayal and development. I marathoned it in one night, just could not stop reading. Now my head is hurting behind my eyes, but NO REGRET. Your ending left me content and smiling. Your battles on edge of my chair, ah the drama, the suspense, the dismay. All lovely. Damn good writing.

Thank you for writing and sharing this work. Kudos! 3

Wow. I don’t normally read things this serious, but I’m glad I stuck with it. The plot, characters and the ending… so very well done.

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I think this Naruto is a fucking idiot who cares more about his pride than his family. He is naive enough to believe he can save everyone in his team in exchange of him getting very hurt and killing his wife inside.

Great story my guy. Well written and I loved how you put together in the end as well

I'll say that I should have seen the ending coming but I had not. And as much as I would like to say that I liked the ending whole heartedly, I can't.

It's an extremely well written story. No question about it. The ending? Once again quite mature and understandable. But I can't dig it. Maybe cause I could not get over my bias against Hinata. Maybe cause I'm not mature enough to understand or cause it's something I can't or don't want to imagine any Naruto doing.

However, this is an amazing story. That is certain.

I reread most of the second half of the story. It's a really great job

great story. just loved it

That was an amazing story :) I loved it although the ending was surprising. I wonder how exactly was Shino able to fight B to a standstill. He was never much of a great fighter... Or even one that stood out.

Brilliant brilliant story, the emotions, the loose ends, the ending, all well done. I hope you keep writing.