Reviews for Destiny
Mr. HaVoK chapter 32 . 4/8/2006
well written story from jehuty's point of view...

i liked the usage of ...personification of the frames...
Warp Ligia Obscura chapter 32 . 11/14/2005
Beautiful fic. The Jehuty POV is nice. Having compliments from Cynical Swordsmater is a definite plus. Hope you write more fics. :D
kitedragon chapter 22 . 2/2/2005
Best scores I know for this mission:

10** kills

18 LEV survivors

22 LEV's lost

Rank: SS

( I think? )

Oh yeah, I just love finding the Viv Viper, grabbing him, sheild, swing, spin and throw. Near the end, and he gets so freaked out. LOL
kitedragon chapter 32 . 2/2/2005
Never been to the Z.O.E. place on fanfic, but that was really good. Fantastic. And oh, on the mission when you save the civilians in the buildings against the Spiders, if you beat it on max dificulty with no ally casualties, a short movie occurs. Wanna know what? Anyway, it was a really great story. Post #76! lol
Spadde chapter 32 . 11/5/2004
chero666 chapter 32 . 10/17/2004
-Yo, dude. No problem. Anything to encourage a fellow fic writer.

-BTW... I never got around to doing this... so I'm just gonna type it here...

-I love Neon Jedi Evangelion... for some reason, I never got around to reviewing... strange... meh!

-Anywho, whenever there's a fic out there worth reviewing... then it's worth the 5 minutes that it takes me to type down this crap. I'm easily distracted. ;

-Til we meet again...

May the Swartz be with You! (Spaceballs rulz)
Finalsaber chapter 32 . 10/16/2004
I don't know if you know this or not, but you missed one last part. Have you ever taken the time to watch the end credits? If so, you know what I'm thinking of.

Even if this was the last Z.O.E game, their's no point in letting the story end here...
Mimic12355 chapter 32 . 10/10/2004
That was a great ending, even though I knew how it ended; it's like romeo and juliet or something.
Aki Kitsune chapter 32 . 10/9/2004's over. I think you did great with it being a just made the ending more sweet and sad. I'd rather a story never end but I'm glad that it was done so well. I'll just have to keep reading fics that take place after the end of the games so the story never ends lol. Thanks for writing's been fun. Bai...

~Aki Kitsune
chero666 chapter 31 . 9/10/2004
Hm... what I think is interesting is that in every video game or anime, the second a bad guy is beaten, a bigger one pops is ugly little (or big, depending on what you're watching) head from hell and starts beating the crap outta the main guy.

Do I watch too much TV?

No, didn't think so.

Do I play too many video games?

What's too much? You can never have too much!
Aki Kitsune chapter 31 . 9/7/2004
Very great work...It's great to add to the game in ways like the "Nephtis Flip" move.'s great that you add these emotions. Many times, players will just go right through battles in games and NEVER see things as the characters do. That final move...I ALWAYS so that...I hold down the burst button and float there for a moment just looking at him..then strike him down. Sad to see the story finishing up and yet I can't wait to see your take on the ending.
Videogame Fan chapter 30 . 8/13/2004
This fanfic is great!

The Vector Cannon words that Jehuty says are cool.

Strange though. When I fought Anubis on this level he was no problem. He never even hit me!

Strange. Anyway I hope you update soon.
chero666 chapter 30 . 8/11/2004
Ah.. hot robot on robot action... only in a mech game can I say that without it sounding... fruity... sometimes.

I hope that this fic teaches everyone a lesson... never fight someone who smiles while you hit him. You're just gonna fricken lose, especially if it's your brother. I tried to fight my brother one time... it didn't end well and I was forced to drink that expired milk. Joke on him though... I made his coffee with what was left over. Bam Bitch!
Aki Kitsune chapter 30 . 8/7/2004
Whoa...godd fight going there...but is it just me or is Jehuty taking a beating? Sure they get par with eachother over and over but poor Jehuty seems to get hurt...a lot...but Jehuty has to win so something good is going to happen. _
Mimic12355 chapter 30 . 8/7/2004
That chapter was great! The action, the tension, the other stuff, keep up the good work.
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