Reviews for Bobbity
UIa chapter 9 . 10/12
plz update...I ope the Malfoys are nice
DarkRavie chapter 9 . 10/7
I really like this story. It's an excellent read and I look forward to reading what happens in your next chapter.
sesshyloverforever2me chapter 9 . 10/7
first of all I hope you feel better soon second of all I love the chapter is very well written and I can't wait to see what happens next I'm actually curious what Lucius is up to so looking forward to finding that out
ChicagoChaingang chapter 1 . 10/6
Im sorry but i can't read any further. Please get a beta reader, your typos are atrocious.
Kat chapter 1 . 10/5
Who’s ‘Arthur’, and why doesn’t he condone child abuse?

Edit your work. Typos like that make you sound like a typical uneducated redneck. However, I get the feeling that’s the persona you’re going for. Rest easy. A story like this would make the trailer park proud...
DarkRavie chapter 8 . 10/5
I really like this story. It's an excellent read and I look forward to reading what happens in your next chapter.
Miakahitoshi chapter 7 . 9/25
If ya don't like the story or the way it is written...dont read it. I will not feel bad, and nothing you say will anger or make me feel bad because well... it's a story that is fake, in a world that is fake. If it angers you...bye Felicia.
Guest chapter 1 . 9/24
The romanticized and heavily exaggerated child abuse in your story suggests you enjoy hurting people. The gun wielding bimbo you use for your story ‘art’ suggests you’re a sexist gun nut. Your writing is indicative of a lack of education. An unedited story points to laziness.

Let me guess, you’re one of those right wing bigots. Keep making America ‘great’, one badly written story at a time.
DarkRavie chapter 7 . 9/22
I really like this story. It's an excellent read and I look forward to reading what happens in your next chapter.
Mrs.Muessig chapter 7 . 9/22
omg I love it. will the next chapter be them swimming?
Mrs.Muessig chapter 6 . 6/30
please write more on this story. I really enjoy it.
Guest chapter 1 . 5/31
Why would you want to use a picture of some dumb bimbo with guns for your profile picture?

Oh wait... poor grammar; Inability to use punctuation; Bad spelling; A poorly thought out plot; Romanticized child abuse; A poster of Trump on your bedroom to get you in the mood...

Okay. I know why now. I have a question: did you drool when you wrote this and did it make the keyboard sticky?
Hope06 chapter 6 . 5/30
Awwww the scene everyone all cuddled up
DarkRavie chapter 6 . 5/30
I really like this story. It's an excellent read and I look forward to reading what happens in your next chapter.
sexinurse chapter 5 . 5/29
love the story so far. I hope you continue to write chapters.
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