Reviews for Early Arrival
Jani chapter 26 . 6/9/2020
This fic was sooo much fun! Thank you for writing it and sharing it with us. Thank you "husband" for editting. Loved it all.
Jani chapter 7 . 6/8/2020
This is so fun! It was particularly gratifying to read of Jabba's demise.
dragonfox123 chapter 1 . 5/6/2020
Interesting chapter and plot and idea
KageOkami-Kogo chapter 26 . 3/3/2020
This was an amazing story! I read it in two days (with many interruptions in between, like food, sleep, and needy family, bah!) Excellent job! While it did feel a little rushed towards the end, everything was tied up pretty neatly. Encore?
World Weary Stargazer chapter 8 . 1/31/2020
8 chapters in and I think I'm done. There's just nothing going on. Not a single character has any real motivation or goal. There's no story here. Our characters need to want something for us to care.

Y'know when Jabba sent his goons to steal everyone's water I thought that finally we had something. Finally our characters had something to do. Maybe the assassination would go wrong somehow and the story could actually start taking some turns.

Nope. That plot line is wrapped up in like 3 paragraphs and with no conflict, the story instantly lost all its wheels. Now we get chapters where nothing happens. I suspect that you noticed this too, hence why we now find ourselves skipping months and months at a time between scenes. Scenes which have little to know impact on the story and prob could be cut tbh. Idk why we need to know that baby Luke/Leia called the big banthas, and if it is important it prob could have been worked into a more impactful scene.

With 20 or so chapters left to read, maybe these issues change but I'm not seeing much promise here. Sorry.
Guest chapter 7 . 1/20/2020
I love Padme in this. I absolutely love her. She is so strong
Guest chapter 6 . 1/20/2020
Oh wow you are writing such a beautiful story. The relations and the characters are portrayed perfectly. We have a lot of Baby Luke and Leia too.
Ambaire chapter 26 . 1/16/2020
A beautiful au crackfic. Loved it.
Ambaire chapter 7 . 1/16/2020
Ahahhahaha. Such an amazing scene.
Magemaster chapter 26 . 1/1/2020
This was a very interesting fic. I greatly enjoyed reading it. I giggled when you code-named the Death Star 'Tom'.
XanaduHawk chapter 26 . 12/28/2019
You had me until the last chapter where Han and Leia married the wrong people.
ksecc1 chapter 23 . 12/26/2019
Heh. Eaten by a Krayte dragon. That’s another one for the list of hilarious Palpatine deaths. Thank you!
The Jingo chapter 26 . 12/6/2019
Thanks for the read
The Jingo chapter 16 . 12/6/2019
Palpatine is so kekworthy
mkeeg91 chapter 26 . 12/5/2019
Was half hoping the twins would make Palpatine good as well.
Would have been funny but great job as always.
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