Reviews for Early Arrival |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I'm impressed that Luke was calm for his diaper changes. Took Christopher a month or so to realize we weren't actually murdering him each time. Also, whoever brought up the Temple younglings, *bad* timing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loving this. |
![]() ![]() help keep anakin in the light padme |
![]() ![]() ![]() Jedi men are hysterical. They can fight unending battles with droids effortlessly...but change a dirty diaper and they come unglued! That's too funny! And, yeah, you don't wanna upset new mommies. Not at all. Especially not one Senator from Naboo! But, yeah...here comes Owen and Beru! This is going to get interesting now. Sidious is stewing. Yoda is off sulking in the mud and muck, and Bail is boohooing. For once, Obi is the only one using any sense. Ah, how refreshing! :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() great chapter. looking forward to seeing Sidious piece it all together. |
![]() ![]() ![]() don't anger padme |
![]() ![]() Oh man this has so much promise. I can’t wait to see where you take it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Really enjoying this! Anakin feels so different because having the trauma of taking Padme away is not there. He feels much more dangerous because of that and it’s keeping me in the story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is great! I definitely love this take on a ROTS AU. Vaderkin has a lot of things to hash out with Padme and Obi-Wan. I doubt this will be the only conversation/argument that will occur about Anakin's actions. Not to mention, they're probably going to have to deal with Palpatine and whatever else is going on with the rest of the galaxy at some point. I can't wait to see what else you have planned. Also, the twins are adorable! I enjoy all of your stories and I look forward to anything and everything you write. Keep up the wonderful work! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Another great update! I loved it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() ROFL...Oh, the image of Obi&Ani trying to change a poopy diaper is beyond hilarious! I nearly cried at that one! And, Obi is indeed the great Negotiator, for sure !And Great update |
![]() ![]() ![]() Another great chapter update! Loved how Obi-Wan defused the situation with the twins... though that could have backfired... |
![]() ![]() ![]() I have a feeling Palpatine will have his hands full with Daddy Vader and his kids. I can see Leia being more like Anakin and Luke more like Padme, yet forces not to be reckoned with. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Honestly, I get why Obi-Wan is trying to play peacemaker, but I think Padme has it right. Anakin deserves a proper tongue lashing for what he did. I doubt Padme will hold back forever. |
![]() ![]() Enjoying your story |