Reviews for Early Arrival |
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![]() ![]() ![]() AW! Oh my goodness, Obi-wan cuddling a little baby is adorable! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh. My. I love this story already! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love the thought of unflappable Obi Wan and brake Anakin panicking as they deliver twins early. I almost delivered our last in the car, and I know my calm husband was terrified. Thanks for writing this! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great Story... I like the way Obiwan has somehow understood why Anakin felt that turning against the Jedi was the only way to save his wife. Can’t wait to read more of this captivating story. :] |
![]() ![]() I really enjoyed this. And YES! Mothers are heroes. |
![]() ![]() ![]() padme will be very angry with Anakin... Yoda is not happy Jedi ,because Vader is not death |
![]() ![]() ![]() Anakin killing the children was the one thing I couldn't get past, especially considering he was supposedly going to the Dark Side for his wife and children. Anyway, I always felt it was the one thing Padme would have trouble forgiving. I find it interesting that it's the thing that Anakin tries to gloss over the most, and I think it's because it was the one thing he did that was unforgivable. Anyway, thanks for another interesting chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() yesss Leia! Im loving Obiwan! thanks so much. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Luke! and Leia is coming ;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG. It's always good to see a new fic of yours! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Read all three chapters, and it is most enjoyable. I'm sorry, but the idea of Obi writhing in terror at Padme giving birth is so funny! It'll be interesting if they seek help to hide from Jabba and the Hutts amidst all that coarse sand. It gets everywhere, don't you know. And, while Obi should be chastised for stowing away, at the same time it is rather fortuitous that he's there...and not hauling them all off to Yoda's and Bail's clutches. Hopefully, they can hide with or very near the Lars clan. Can't wait to see what happens next! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I think the best line was Padmè's screech. xD I can imagine having the same reaction. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is very insightful & a very good story. |
![]() ![]() Enjoying your story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well... at least Vader/Anakin will suffer a little for what he did. Going back to Tatooine. That's rough... And coarse... And gets everywhere... (I'm not sorry) |